Beko, your letters are overlapping to much, give them some room to breathe.
Beko, your letters are overlapping to much, give them some room to breathe.
hey im back, been about a year or so since ive been here, heres some of the latest
pm if from the 613
Beko. Take it easy, don't press so hard with the pencil. (it's easier to erase and fix, it doesn't leave "carbon copies" in the pages below it.) Your curved letters tend to get bulbous in parts for now try and keep them even. For example the bottom of the B and O. The center of the B where the two curved portions meet is a bit too thick. Try making it the width of the bar from the top. Keep it up.
how are my straights lookin?
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Last edited by SkateJunt; 12-01-2011 at 08:19 PM.
Looking like crap! The bar consistency is everywhere different, comon you must do straights like a real mafakka, check your keyboard.
Naked exchange. crits for improvement?
more simps, didnt bother with 3d, and sadgeh ive been drawing my keyboard for the past 3 weeks, im trying to tweak the letters a bit
Picture 122 by SkateJunt, on Flickr
need some serious crits from the serious and respectable boys on here (you mans know who you are)
this baby's planned to go on a sweet highway spot i got this sunday, gonna be about 115 ft. long (letters are gonna be hand-reaching height) and filled in with chrome
hit me
just posting here cuz i dunno give yall something to look at?
Phat, just fuckin blast it out. Something that big's guna be awesome anyway. Only thing i'd say is space the letters out a little bit more. That is all!!
Oldie for chat,
Broken Bones - TBSK MPDS DIGISIN 4298
I'm not one of those guys, I don't think, but I think 'karma' could use a little tweaking to flow a little bit better, and the 'R' in 'Absorbing' can be defined a little bit more. Try making the look bigger and bring the leg back a little bit. These crits aren't too important, it'll look sweet no matter what. There was a huge highway piece in Jersey a while ago, I forget exactly but I think it was something like "Destroy-create-rebuild" or something like that. Looking forward to flicks of the finished product.Originally Posted by Phat 2
need some serious crits from the serious and respectable boys on here (you mans know who you are)
this baby's planned to go on a sweet highway spot i got this sunday, gonna be about 115 ft. long (letters are gonna be hand-reaching height) and filled in with chrome
hit me
dont bring the middle of the m to the ground, bring it up a tad like where that bar crosses the a, give it more negative space, and watch those bar widths (A's & K's particulary look bad). There arent enough cracks either, makes it look like just a bunch of fucked up lines imo, doesnt really give it that cracked effect unless you use the perfect amount
my first 3d sketch
single "radical" vanishing point... i do not have color markers.. im waiting on jolly old saint consumerist (santa) to bring me some
I've recently started doing some handstyles and working on a name. I finally settled on ENDS, but made the mistake of showing people the sketches of them etc. I have a couple other names I have in mind, and am wondering if I should change my name. Also, I have a picture of a couple quick handstyles of 3 different names looking for crits, etc.
looks good.. go crazier + tie things together.. work out side your comfort zone...I've recently started doing some handstyles and working on a name. I finally settled on ENDS, but made the mistake of showing people the sketches of them etc. I have a couple other names I have in mind, and am wondering if I should change my name. Also, I have a picture of a couple quick handstyles of 3 different names looking for crits, etc.
tra kind liar - im sorry but that looks horrible i cant make out one letter, u need to just work on Key Board letter right now
askew - do not go crazier, and those should be in the toy tags thread, not here.
both u guys should also go check out the new to graffiti forum since u are both just starting
wait wait... i was just doing random shapes, i didnt do letters..... well damn.. is this feed just for letters?
This is graffiti. Rarely you'll find 3d pieces but otherwise yes, its letter based. And hold back on giving advice.
oh... well next time tell people it doesnt say anything
Couple unfinished things, crits would be appreciated...
Broken Bones - TBSK MPDS DIGISIN 4298
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