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    how are my straights lookin?

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    Looking like crap! The bar consistency is everywhere different, comon you must do straights like a real mafakka, check your keyboard.

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    Naked exchange. crits for improvement?Name:  naked.jpg
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    more simps, didnt bother with 3d, and sadgeh ive been drawing my keyboard for the past 3 weeks, im trying to tweak the letters a bit

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    need some serious crits from the serious and respectable boys on here (you mans know who you are)
    this baby's planned to go on a sweet highway spot i got this sunday, gonna be about 115 ft. long (letters are gonna be hand-reaching height) and filled in with chrome



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    just posting here cuz i dunno give yall something to look at?

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    Phat, just fuckin blast it out. Something that big's guna be awesome anyway. Only thing i'd say is space the letters out a little bit more. That is all!!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Phat 2 View Post
    need some serious crits from the serious and respectable boys on here (you mans know who you are)
    this baby's planned to go on a sweet highway spot i got this sunday, gonna be about 115 ft. long (letters are gonna be hand-reaching height) and filled in with chrome



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    I'm not one of those guys, I don't think, but I think 'karma' could use a little tweaking to flow a little bit better, and the 'R' in 'Absorbing' can be defined a little bit more. Try making the look bigger and bring the leg back a little bit. These crits aren't too important, it'll look sweet no matter what. There was a huge highway piece in Jersey a while ago, I forget exactly but I think it was something like "Destroy-create-rebuild" or something like that. Looking forward to flicks of the finished product.

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    dont bring the middle of the m to the ground, bring it up a tad like where that bar crosses the a, give it more negative space, and watch those bar widths (A's & K's particulary look bad). There arent enough cracks either, makes it look like just a bunch of fucked up lines imo, doesnt really give it that cracked effect unless you use the perfect amount

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    single "radical" vanishing point... i do not have color markers.. im waiting on jolly old saint consumerist (santa) to bring me some Name:  100_0688.jpg
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    I've recently started doing some handstyles and working on a name. I finally settled on ENDS, but made the mistake of showing people the sketches of them etc. I have a couple other names I have in mind, and am wondering if I should change my name. Also, I have a picture of a couple quick handstyles of 3 different names looking for crits, etc.Name:  DSCN1349.jpg
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    Quote Originally Posted by askew View Post
    I've recently started doing some handstyles and working on a name. I finally settled on ENDS, but made the mistake of showing people the sketches of them etc. I have a couple other names I have in mind, and am wondering if I should change my name. Also, I have a picture of a couple quick handstyles of 3 different names looking for crits, etc.Name:  DSCN1349.jpg
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    looks good.. go crazier + tie things together.. work out side your comfort zone...

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    tra kind liar - im sorry but that looks horrible i cant make out one letter, u need to just work on Key Board letter right now
    askew - do not go crazier, and those should be in the toy tags thread, not here.
    both u guys should also go check out the new to graffiti forum since u are both just starting

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    Quote Originally Posted by EWL24 View Post
    tra kind liar - im sorry but that looks horrible i cant make out one letter, u need to just work on Key Board letter right now
    askew - do not go crazier, and those should be in the toy tags thread, not here.
    both u guys should also go check out the new to graffiti forum since u are both just starting
    wait wait... i was just doing random shapes, i didnt do letters..... well damn.. is this feed just for letters?

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    This is graffiti. Rarely you'll find 3d pieces but otherwise yes, its letter based. And hold back on giving advice.

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    Quote Originally Posted by tra_kind_liar View Post
    wait wait... i was just doing random shapes, i didnt do letters...
    oh... well next time tell people it doesnt say anything

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    Couple unfinished things, crits would be appreciated...


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    the B and E on the second one is the only thing I like. what happened to the steaz like form your last battle entries?

    some bullshit
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    Phat I know I'm not one of those respectable men. So I'm not going to really crit it. But one thing I noticed was that the N in Absorbing seemed to be hidden to much.

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    tempo do simple things like this.
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