tempo do simple things like this.
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tempo do simple things like this.
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haha syn, I didn't mean to say that you're not respectable, I was just referring to the guys that have a bit more experience in this stuff, coz their comments are usually more accurate and useful..
anyway, we painted that piece today and it was fucking exhausting, it's a highway spot, and the thing is MONSTROUS really. it's so big, I couldn't fit the whole thing in one photo despite the fact that I crossed the road to take the flick. I ended up taking a lotta consecutive flicks which I'm gonna stick together.
will post the thing once I get the patience and physical strength to use photoshop again...
thanks for the input though everyone
looking for some feedback, much appreciated. Still a toy, but working hard.
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I tried to do like a 3d crack ordeal in this. But I was so blunted I went with too many cracks so... I fucked that one up.
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that T is garbage. and you've used it in the last 3 shits you posted
Looking for some crits on this before I ink it up. I think I need to make the K smaller. The 3d missing on the W is already fixed. Didn't notice before I posted.
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Last edited by Tempo718; 12-04-2011 at 05:19 PM.
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@syn lay down 2 horizontal lines before you sketch, cause the ewt is like a half inch higher than the rest. Then look at all your bar widths and make them consistant( whole T, top of E, top of S, bottom of S). Then look at the negative space of all your letters, the worst part is the space between the K and E at the top, find a way to get rid of that.
Ribcage - Agreed with the letters being higher up. But one thing. The bars I purposely made them uneven. Like thin to thicker.
looks like shit, it goes from thin to deformed, not thinner to thicker. that extension on top of the E also looks like shit. your 3d is also fucked up in some places
I like that syn. Your improving. Get a little more funk with your W.
Crits? Not so sure about the cuts in my bars.
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erase the M, move it to the left, and then make it so your U isnt hidden. you got a bunch of space to the left on that page, so use it
i like it but maybe make both parts on the bottom of the M the same
andy crits on this?
Picture 123 by SkateJunt, on Flickr
Ok seriously. Are you outlining your letters in pencil and then going over in sharpie, or are you just doing it freestyle with a sharpie? I find it hard to believe for someone who can't even make straight letters. Break down your letters into bars.
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thats sweet, day offs are always fun... i get to wake up @ 330. And yes, i meant the kemos one. o and its you vs extinct in the last round of the round robin, so hit him up and decide on a battle
sup guys, first time postin pics, just a quick sketch im playin wit, any crits are apreciated, ill be colorin it later tonight so sorry for the light pencil lines. (thinking of a limeish green fade to a yellow that ends about halfwayup but still has a yellowish inline around most the letter, with probally a grey letter outline..not really good with 3d yet so ill prolly leave that off.)
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Last edited by dest1; 12-04-2011 at 07:07 PM.
handy i been gettin up with..
sketch im about to color (yellow/greens,white,grey outline)
some other ishhh...
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Last edited by dest1; 12-04-2011 at 07:32 PM.
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