Round 2. Still not even close to perfect. Crit it.
top bar of E sucks, top bar of T is lackin on the left side, make it mirror the right, and make it the same width. K and W are obese looking, top bar of S is weird, and the W and T still sit lowe than the rest... theirs now a weird space in between the W's outside bars, make the middle part go up higher, and maybe make those outside bars at a sharper angle. peace
I realize how much of a toy I am but im just lookin for any feedback on a couple ideas
and i know how gay that arrow looks and the pencil hapa sketch is half assed
Hapa that 3d one isn't bad dude. Add a light source and shadows and it's pretty solid. good practice.
happpa dat sque is lookin goood
Last edited by SynOne; 12-05-2011 at 07:28 PM.
well im not lol'ing. im disgusted, I try to help you, and this is how you do me? fuckin ridiculous
Lol Calm down Leonardo I took it down. It was more of just testing shit. I had absolutely no idea how to cover for all the dead space in the W.
you mean it was just bitting my shit and see how it would look on your sketch? IF you have no idea how to do something, you shoud ask, not bite.
Better than your last sketches, but still very shitty/toy bro.
I like that you practice a lot though. That kind of determination will get you somewhere. Hopefully.
you seem like you got some cool stuff. but you always go extra nuts wtih the coloring. i say calm down a little and let your letters show for a change. honestly, whenever i see your flicks, i just scroll down them fast without stopping for fear of getting a headache because of the mess