Colors- like the stickers, but try branching into your own style
Cwks- Love the character and the letters in the first one, work on your letter structure in the second one though
Kapi- love your work and your style. Keep it up.
SkateJunt- Looks pretty good, Just clean up the 3d effect a bit and your sig at the bottom looks a little forced, let it flow man
Peter- That purple burns man, good job.
Freekofart (which i read as freako fart)- Hell yeah man, this is the stuff I like to see and inspires me to keep writing. I would just add some thickness to your sig because it kinda gets lost in the shuffle of awesomeness your shit puts out.
crits on these ones plz
Last edited by cwks; 12-12-2011 at 06:58 PM.
When you're trying to advance your work, you may miss the fact that your bars get fucked up. Keep playing around with your straights and bars and work off what you excel at.
this fool has mad burners, listen to him
i alwasy try to take in whatever anyone has to offer! well as long as it sounds correct! but i thought my bars were pretty acceptable? the k is a little off i thought.
Nah, the letters were weak all around.
the K, E, and O all have fucked up bars. the B is the only letter that is acceptable as far as simps go
boy I'm no meteorologist but I'm pretty sure it's been raining toys this month
Beko: I suggest not bending the leg of your K like that it makes it look like a horrible B. That B is an improvement over your last one. You are getting a firmer grip on structure. Try going straight. No bend to your letters for a little bit (like the E and K anyway).
Whats that by the T there?
That it must be in the throwies thread! But its not very fine readable too much squares for a throw