Naked- I like your AK but the N is too open or too big idk and the E isnt sexy.
@colors pretty good structure im diggen it nice simple just not diggen the color man
@rook not diggen them extensions man go more simple
@norfsuthr not really liken it man the seconed letter i cant even tell what it iss lol and the n' is alright until the extension at the end noo flow no affence just tryna help you out
yeah sick character man.
A sketch i done as a race against the clock to see how fast i could draw it and color
^I posted it to get crits no worries. It says YZEN. The extension on the end isn't actually an extension, it's a capital N. Thanks I'll keep workin with it.
I think your A gets too fat for the other letters, and the R could be better.Really diggin your ME though.
Oh and work on those handstyles man..
Dude Gemer you have some awesome skills. Loving those characters dude.
^^haha thanx man
heres a freestyle i was doin kinda got off topic with the flow and just said fuck it
damn my letters got smaller too :/ fuck it ill keep postin
Top of my S is awkward, and some of the 3D isn't perfect.. Other than that. Crit it.
bring those bastards closer and fix the w
gemer - those r sick, im really digging those chars
SYN - A whole lot better, those letters look real clean, and solid, keep trying to get the bars the same with, they're a little off in some places - like the K and R look a little small and the S a little big. The heights and spacing are good also. Try messing with connections a little, just don't sacrifice the letters and work on that handie, it'll help with the flow of the piece.
GEMER - I don't like the hook in the G, the first E's straight, the MER could be bigger and the thickness of the last R gets too small. Overall flow is decent but the ending E and R gets pretty plain. The right side of the M gets too small and leans too much to the bottom right.
Norf - work on straights, you don't understand letter structure
NAKE - Try using strong contrasting colors, the ones you used are too close in lightness and darkness which makes the piece illegible.
SynOne - My only crit is have more fun it it, Isnt all about clear and read able its about having a bit of emotion on it. flare it out add some varibles in it. Yeah in all its good to get a base structure but the sooner you start experimenting on your style the quicker and easier you will learn.
All we are is just dust in the wind.
Thanks for all the crits guys, I did try to have fun with it a while back. But I was told that I just cant do flairs because of my skill level. But I'll have some fun with it and post another after school.
Also that piece was more for something that I could actually paint. It's a easily paintable piece, which was what I was going for.
Last edited by SynOne; 12-14-2011 at 08:30 AM.
@gemer sick character dude
thanks for the crits dudeess