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    Naked- I like your AK but the N is too open or too big idk and the E isnt sexy.


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    freestyle pencil
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    @colors pretty good structure im diggen it nice simple just not diggen the color man
    @rook not diggen them extensions man go more simple
    @norfsuthr not really liken it man the seconed letter i cant even tell what it iss lol and the n' is alright until the extension at the end noo flow no affence just tryna help you out

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    yeah sick character man.
    A sketch i done as a race against the clock to see how fast i could draw it and color

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    ^I posted it to get crits no worries. It says YZEN. The extension on the end isn't actually an extension, it's a capital N. Thanks I'll keep workin with it.

    I think your A gets too fat for the other letters, and the R could be better.Really diggin your ME though.

    Oh and work on those handstyles man..

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    Nice char's!

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    Dude Gemer you have some awesome skills. Loving those characters dude.

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    ^^haha thanx man
    heres a freestyle i was doin kinda got off topic with the flow and just said fuck it
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    damn my letters got smaller too :/ fuck it ill keep postin

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    ^nicceeeeeee
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    I tagged a bus seat yesterday.

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    thanks dude

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    Top of my S is awkward, and some of the 3D isn't perfect.. Other than that. Crit it.

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    bring those bastards closer and fix the w

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    gemer - those r sick, im really digging those chars

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    SYN - A whole lot better, those letters look real clean, and solid, keep trying to get the bars the same with, they're a little off in some places - like the K and R look a little small and the S a little big. The heights and spacing are good also. Try messing with connections a little, just don't sacrifice the letters and work on that handie, it'll help with the flow of the piece.

    GEMER - I don't like the hook in the G, the first E's straight, the MER could be bigger and the thickness of the last R gets too small. Overall flow is decent but the ending E and R gets pretty plain. The right side of the M gets too small and leans too much to the bottom right.

    Norf - work on straights, you don't understand letter structure

    NAKE - Try using strong contrasting colors, the ones you used are too close in lightness and darkness which makes the piece illegible.


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    SynOne - My only crit is have more fun it it, Isnt all about clear and read able its about having a bit of emotion on it. flare it out add some varibles in it. Yeah in all its good to get a base structure but the sooner you start experimenting on your style the quicker and easier you will learn.
    All we are is just dust in the wind.

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    Quote Originally Posted by SVEZAJEZA View Post
    SynOne - My only crit is have more fun it it, Isnt all about clear and read able its about having a bit of emotion on it. flare it out add some varibles in it. Yeah in all its good to get a base structure but the sooner you start experimenting on your style the quicker and easier you will learn.
    Prob. the best advise i have heard on this site, well said SVEZAJEZA

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    Thanks for all the crits guys, I did try to have fun with it a while back. But I was told that I just cant do flairs because of my skill level. But I'll have some fun with it and post another after school.

    Also that piece was more for something that I could actually paint. It's a easily paintable piece, which was what I was going for.
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    @gemer sick character dude

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    thanks for the crits dudeess


 

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