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    SynOne - My only crit is have more fun it it, Isnt all about clear and read able its about having a bit of emotion on it. flare it out add some varibles in it. Yeah in all its good to get a base structure but the sooner you start experimenting on your style the quicker and easier you will learn.
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    Quote Originally Posted by SVEZAJEZA View Post
    SynOne - My only crit is have more fun it it, Isnt all about clear and read able its about having a bit of emotion on it. flare it out add some varibles in it. Yeah in all its good to get a base structure but the sooner you start experimenting on your style the quicker and easier you will learn.
    Prob. the best advise i have heard on this site, well said SVEZAJEZA

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    Thanks for all the crits guys, I did try to have fun with it a while back. But I was told that I just cant do flairs because of my skill level. But I'll have some fun with it and post another after school.

    Also that piece was more for something that I could actually paint. It's a easily paintable piece, which was what I was going for.
    Last edited by SynOne; 12-14-2011 at 07:30 AM.

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    @gemer sick character dude

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    thanks for the crits dudeess

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    Quote Originally Posted by BigBend View Post
    Prob. the best advise i have heard on this site, well said SVEZAJEZA
    it's actually just toy bait...
    he DID say get a base structure... which is what you don't have

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    i dont give a fuck if my shit gets deleted. some of my shit gets deleted and some doesnt. point is someone saw it. its like the buff of the internet

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    @r does im likeen it just dont knowabout the o looks kinda like an e but the structrues good im diggen it
    @shell 703 thanx man and yours is strait man not real;lt original but structures good and the color come on man get some better maekers
    Last edited by gemer; 12-14-2011 at 12:19 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Phillip McDougall View Post
    it's actually just toy bait...
    he DID say get a base structure... which is what you don't have
    And thats what i mean by this thread and you, you talk shit just like every other big headed ego person on here, instead of acually helping people all you do is down them and say some smart shit this whole website is about helping people not talk shit threw a damn keyboard

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    CRITTS! Says HAEC



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    I'm not talking shit homie... I'm saying you should show us your letter structure. When we see good letter structure, then you take a step in the direction you want to go. After that, style development is up to you. Why do you think I continue posting in the toy thread? I don't have an inflated ego dude... haha.

    The side bars of your H's are SINGLE BARS and should not bend halfway through

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    aight i gotcha phill well heres another one i just did the h bends downwards again but check the rest out bro!

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    Tit's a little sloppy, and I didn't take enough time on my extensions, they are all fucked.

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    structures good but yea it tis a bit sloppy nice color combo tho

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    Gemer- only thing i see wrong is the spacing bro try working on that

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    crits please!
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    those letters are wonky as fuck!, stop all the drips and highlights n shit and learn some letter structure! a reason that I havent posted any of my attempts at style and piecing is cuz i know it looks wack, id only post it if i though it was dece and wanted someone elses opinion, do you honestly think thats good?anyway

    fuckin around wit throws, see anything decent?

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    @ coleo work on structure no need for the waveyness go with more strait lines right now then move up


 

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