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    ok, so i literally started learning graffiti about an hour and a half ago so dont expect perfection (ive seen so many pretentious and arrogant posts here from 'eletists')

    but yeah, its pretty generic but i aint done it long enough to adopt my own style and flow yet


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    crits please
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    ^^ work in progress

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    a little something from Lebanon.....

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    lovin fuckin around with straights lately, the shadinf on the y is fucked a bit, and the left bar of the y kinda fucked up too, but any crits?

    Picture 167 by akryllian through ya head, on Flickr

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    The R fucks up the flow. Chicken bone nowison.

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    yeah im not gonna do that extension on the r anymore, i was just trying it out. how are my other letters though?

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    Chicken Bone?

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    Tight as fuck MN

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    get some flow in there now.

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    exchange i did for my friend, pretty wonky but still any tips?

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    Fitted in three sketches today, not going to bother inking or colouring anything else until I get some structure and legibility going. I would like to inject some flow too, not sure when flow is not just breaking structure atm so trying to cut the shit out. Yesterday's effort was wank - especially when coloured (I fucked that right up)....



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    mn nice, top one is where it's at. go roll that up on some highway or a heaven spot somewhere. maybe find a well visible rooftop.. but props. not a fan of the bottom one. you got very similar things going on with ribcage where you two have a lottta edges and not enough curves so all your letters look kinda stiff and lack motion or fluidity...

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    MN - i really like the top one, u should give it some 3d now
    Wonky - the last one is the best, but the K to S connection is really bad

    wtf, why am i not getting any crits on mine?? can i get some crits now

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    MN dope on the top. Would be fire with an outline and 3d. Roller steeze

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    Quote Originally Posted by Phat 2 View Post
    mn nice, top one is where it's at. go roll that up on some highway or a heaven spot somewhere. maybe find a well visible rooftop.. but props. not a fan of the bottom one. you got very similar things going on with ribcage where you two have a lottta edges and not enough curves so all your letters look kinda stiff and lack motion or fluidity...
    The reason why it may seem like my shit looks like ribs is because I like how his work has great structure to his letters, so I wanted to make sure that I get a solid understanding of my bars before I try to add some funk to it. And after doing that and posting it on here to get some crits, people just assume i'm trying to jack his work and make it mine. But its not like that at all, if you were to look at any other of my works you would see that I'm trying to get my own steeze rollin. It'd be completely different story if everything I posted was similar to his. but hey, I'm toy and I'm just trying to learn. All writers flourish off each other as well as inspire others.

    But thanks for all the good looks on the upper one guys, I probably will throw some 3d and an outline on, but should I do white 3d and a colored outline?

    @Lado - if you did both of those, you have good structure but your extensions are not working well. That Lest piece would be great if the the bottom bars weren't barely hanging on and the Dotch one would be better if your D was a bit bigger to match the T and the extension on the H is breaking the flow. Keep sketching.

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    MN - white 3d and colored outline sounds like it would look really cool on that, but make sure u outline it with a bright color so it really pops

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    ^^well you can tell your buddy to start doing Keyboard letters cause those suck


 

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