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    Quote Originally Posted by SynOne View Post
    This was big fucking fail, was testing some shit. Not even going to finish it. But any tips on somethings that worked/why it didn't work?

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    It looks good, i just think the W is whats throwing it off.

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    Quote Originally Posted by SkateJunt View Post
    came up with a new throw today, any crits?

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    Try making your letters a little less lifeless. Think of a throw as a gang sign. You want it to be thrown up looking like, "AW FUCK YEAH," not like a limp dick. When I have a day that I'm not doing anything, I'll come into the Toy thread and do quickies to help people develop throwies, because throws are the hardest thing to make for yourself when you're a toy. I sucked SO hard at throws. haha.

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    thanks man, yeah i realize i need to put more flow into them, heres another straight for crits

    Picture 171 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr

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    your base bars in the K and R are too thick. You want consistency.

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    Quote Originally Posted by TastyMcNasty View Post


    for nark
    bottom page bump, for crits
    Jealousy, some say it's sickening
    They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury


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    do your outline in goat's blood and pray to the dark lord

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    A lil something... trying some new stuff out and I was bored. =/ Tell me what you guys think! Please if you can give me any tips on improving and getting better I'd much appreciate it. C&C please! Thanks!


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    Skate - why do u never fully color in ur pieces? dont u think it would look better if u took some time to completely fill it
    Tasty - i think u should start making ur letters fatter so it doesnt look so long and skinny
    Poisn - use bars and work with simple keyboard letters

    colored this in today, crits are always welcome
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    @tasty styles there and all and structures pretty good but i think its sloppyyyyyyyy
    @poisn wowww work on structure more.....do nice block letter just like you see on your keyboard
    @sync pretty sweet man im diggen but then again im not..not sure wut it is but overall pretty dope
    @ewal not diggen the a' but the rest is alright man keep em comin

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    Revised over a few things.

    Gemer - Nice sketchin'

    Skate - That mos' recent one keep up on that, big difference

    Tasty - Not feelin' it son

    Poison&Syn - Jump on the alphabet keyboard letters bandwagon ma dudez.



    Ewl&Sync - Nice colors n' all that but your letters could flow in a differnt way na mean.
    I smoke Vega


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    Quote Originally Posted by EWL24 View Post
    Skate - why do u never fully color in ur pieces? dont u think it would look better if u took some time to completely fill it
    Tasty - i think u should start making ur letters fatter so it doesnt look so long and skinny
    Poisn - use bars and work with simple keyboard letters

    colored this in today, crits are always welcome
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    sharpies dry out really fast so i dont like to waste them, but il try to take some time to fully colour some stuff, id just rather focus on letters right now, to be honest i dont give a shit about fills, because a nice fill with bad letters looks shit

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    some characters????

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    Tempo - Yeah, I don't need to get back on keyboard letters. But thanks for trying to crit.

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    I smoke Vega


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    Tempo - On your R the leg needs to act as part of the Loop (Pic Below because I suck at explaining.) Really the only thing that needs to line up is the bottom point they meet.

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    Tempo - Its cool and simple, be creative and do some things with it. Experiment and look if its good but post it.

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    so i gotta ask for crits??????

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    @rook not liken the first one wack extension bottom ones alright tho good the structures gettin better

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    Quote Originally Posted by sadgeh View Post

    Crits on these?
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    bump

    @Physh yes for some reason.


 

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