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    A lil something... trying some new stuff out and I was bored. =/ Tell me what you guys think! Please if you can give me any tips on improving and getting better I'd much appreciate it. C&C please! Thanks!


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    Skate - why do u never fully color in ur pieces? dont u think it would look better if u took some time to completely fill it
    Tasty - i think u should start making ur letters fatter so it doesnt look so long and skinny
    Poisn - use bars and work with simple keyboard letters

    colored this in today, crits are always welcome
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    @tasty styles there and all and structures pretty good but i think its sloppyyyyyyyy
    @poisn wowww work on structure more.....do nice block letter just like you see on your keyboard
    @sync pretty sweet man im diggen but then again im not..not sure wut it is but overall pretty dope
    @ewal not diggen the a' but the rest is alright man keep em comin

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    Revised over a few things.

    Gemer - Nice sketchin'

    Skate - That mos' recent one keep up on that, big difference

    Tasty - Not feelin' it son

    Poison&Syn - Jump on the alphabet keyboard letters bandwagon ma dudez.



    Ewl&Sync - Nice colors n' all that but your letters could flow in a differnt way na mean.
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    Quote Originally Posted by EWL24 View Post
    Skate - why do u never fully color in ur pieces? dont u think it would look better if u took some time to completely fill it
    Tasty - i think u should start making ur letters fatter so it doesnt look so long and skinny
    Poisn - use bars and work with simple keyboard letters

    colored this in today, crits are always welcome
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    sharpies dry out really fast so i dont like to waste them, but il try to take some time to fully colour some stuff, id just rather focus on letters right now, to be honest i dont give a shit about fills, because a nice fill with bad letters looks shit

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    some characters????

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    Tempo - Yeah, I don't need to get back on keyboard letters. But thanks for trying to crit.

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    Tempo - On your R the leg needs to act as part of the Loop (Pic Below because I suck at explaining.) Really the only thing that needs to line up is the bottom point they meet.

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    Tempo - Its cool and simple, be creative and do some things with it. Experiment and look if its good but post it.

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    so i gotta ask for crits??????

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    @rook not liken the first one wack extension bottom ones alright tho good the structures gettin better

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    Quote Originally Posted by sadgeh View Post

    Crits on these?
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    bump

    @Physh yes for some reason.

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    Quote Originally Posted by SkateJunt View Post
    sharpies dry out really fast so i dont like to waste them, but il try to take some time to fully colour some stuff, id just rather focus on letters right now, to be honest i dont give a shit about fills, because a nice fill with bad letters looks shit
    working on letters is the main goal for all of us, but working on fills can actually help u. I have some old drawings were u can see all the lines from the marker in the fill and then its lighter on one side and darker on the other, so if u work with makers a lot ur pieces wont look like that.

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    yeah i know what you mean, but i dont intent on painting a piece for a long time, until i can sketch them black and white with ease, heres some more straights

    Picture 173 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr

    Picture 174 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr

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    tight as fuck^

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    thanks holmes


 

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