This was big fucking fail, was testing some shit. Not even going to finish it. But any tips on somethings that worked/why it didn't work?
This was big fucking fail, was testing some shit. Not even going to finish it. But any tips on somethings that worked/why it didn't work?
Syn: The 3d is a little off. The curve on the R is the worst part of the 3d. I think the K/E is a bit odd. I like the E, but I think having it curve at the bottom and lean on the K would have worked a little better. The R doesn't seem to fit the style. It looks a bit more plain and has a lot of dead space under it where the rest of the piece has none. I wouldn't say a complete fail. You're getting better that's for sure.
came up with a new throw today, any crits?
Picture 170 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr
It looks good, i just think the W is whats throwing it off.Originally Posted by SynOne
This was big fucking fail, was testing some shit. Not even going to finish it. But any tips on somethings that worked/why it didn't work?
Try making your letters a little less lifeless. Think of a throw as a gang sign. You want it to be thrown up looking like, "AW FUCK YEAH," not like a limp dick. When I have a day that I'm not doing anything, I'll come into the Toy thread and do quickies to help people develop throwies, because throws are the hardest thing to make for yourself when you're a toy. I sucked SO hard at throws. haha.
thanks man, yeah i realize i need to put more flow into them, heres another straight for crits
Picture 171 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr
your base bars in the K and R are too thick. You want consistency.
bottom page bump, for crits
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its one of my first.....any tips? i would be thankful
A lil something... trying some new stuff out and I was bored. =/ Tell me what you guys think! Please if you can give me any tips on improving and getting better I'd much appreciate it. C&C please! Thanks!
Skate - why do u never fully color in ur pieces? dont u think it would look better if u took some time to completely fill it
Tasty - i think u should start making ur letters fatter so it doesnt look so long and skinny
Poisn - use bars and work with simple keyboard letters
colored this in today, crits are always welcome
@tasty styles there and all and structures pretty good but i think its sloppyyyyyyyy
@poisn wowww work on structure more.....do nice block letter just like you see on your keyboard
@sync pretty sweet man im diggen but then again im not..not sure wut it is but overall pretty dope
@ewal not diggen the a' but the rest is alright man keep em comin
Revised over a few things.
Gemer - Nice sketchin'
Skate - That mos' recent one keep up on that, big difference
Tasty - Not feelin' it son
Poison&Syn - Jump on the alphabet keyboard letters bandwagon ma dudez.
Ewl&Sync - Nice colors n' all that but your letters could flow in a differnt way na mean.
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sharpies dry out really fast so i dont like to waste them, but il try to take some time to fully colour some stuff, id just rather focus on letters right now, to be honest i dont give a shit about fills, because a nice fill with bad letters looks shitSkate - why do u never fully color in ur pieces? dont u think it would look better if u took some time to completely fill it
Tasty - i think u should start making ur letters fatter so it doesnt look so long and skinny
Poisn - use bars and work with simple keyboard letters
colored this in today, crits are always welcome
some characters????
Tempo - Yeah, I don't need to get back on keyboard letters. But thanks for trying to crit.
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Tempo - On your R the leg needs to act as part of the Loop (Pic Below because I suck at explaining.) Really the only thing that needs to line up is the bottom point they meet.
Tempo - Its cool and simple, be creative and do some things with it. Experiment and look if its good but post it.
Crits on these?
so i gotta ask for crits??????
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