Blackbooks

[sadgeh]

Crits on these?
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@Physh yes for some reason.

[EWL24]

sharpies dry out really fast so i dont like to waste them, but il try to take some time to fully colour some stuff, id just rather focus on letters right now, to be honest i dont give a shit about fills, because a nice fill with bad letters looks shit

working on letters is the main goal for all of us, but working on fills can actually help u. I have some old drawings were u can see all the lines from the marker in the fill and then its lighter on one side and darker on the other, so if u work with makers a lot ur pieces wont look like that.

[SkateJunt]

yeah i know what you mean, but i dont intent on painting a piece for a long time, until i can sketch them black and white with ease, heres some more straights

Picture 173 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr

Picture 174 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr

[always crushin]

[SkateJunt]

tight as fuck^

[always crushin]

thanks holmes

[Wonky]

I can't read it Crush...

I am going way simple after the car crash I produced yesterday...

[Skadeem]

It says shake right? If so I'd work more with the H but it's really all personal preference at this point and it does have some nice flow. The scribble above it makes me laugh reminiscently.

[always crushin]

ya it reads shake man my handstyles are my weakest yet strongest point i do my pieces in handstyle form before pieceing but hands for taggin are garbage because i cant do the same tribal letters fast enough.
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[gemer]

dopee style mann ^^ good stuff

[Phillip McDougall]

That shit is way dank slotr. I'm gonna have to step my letter game up for that one, thanks for the healthy competition.

[always crushin]

no worries phil you said you wanted some practice.

[Wonky]

Anyone like my Simp? Any crits / advice?

[Tempo718]

allways - i feel i should be doin wat ur doin building structure through a more complex handstyle i've heard its critical in development around here but i dont know when is the right time to open that can of worms.

[always crushin]

[EWL24]

Wonky - the leg of the Q is a bit fat and the extensions coming off each letter are kinda weird,but other then that it looks good, keep doing simps like that

[Wonky]

Tried this again - better?

[Phillip McDougall]

Stop doing that connect letter thing. Just stick with doing the letters individually. The only letter that looks good is the W, and you need to take those bent bars off it anyway.

[Wonky]

Cheers - I don[t really need to add that stupid shit but i'm trying - actually the blocky letters are kind of interesting - they would be if I could add some slant and flow...

[Wonky]

thought id try one more sketch, keeping letterforms nice and simple, took some advice (thanks crushing) and did something a bit more rounded and organic...