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    ill stuff gem your letters are ruude n sone your styles on point with that pen game. you guys wont get much qualitative input from most of the kats in this thread imo move it to intermediate

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    absolutly horrible outline. playing with stuff for my end of a Slotr exchange.
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    i really like blue an yellow together! crits please!
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    Beko: Koto, Kote? T isn't bad. That K needs some work. And whatever is on the end needs medical attention. You're improving over all, but keep working on your straights and getting them to flow.

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    ya beko that k needs some work..the charecter isnt bad, in my opinion lose the splashes coming off the charecter

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    looks to me like theres a lot of rockin been going on....i had a few days off drawing... did these today


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    K's are super hard for me!
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    wonky I got 2 lady down after that one. good show
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    I suggest making your K with 3 straight bars at first. Bending them (especially the top bar) can be troublesome. I am going to use Wonky's pieces as an example here. His style is pretty straight up and simple, but they have some funk. Once you get your basic letter forms down you can start bending them etc. Here is a straight 3 bar K for example.
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    Thanks I think Tempo. Any crits / comments?
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    Wonky: that blue piece is solid. Work on your S's though. The blue one isn't too bad, but the pink one is a bit rough. The E on the pink one needs some work. I like your blue E far better. If it where me I'd work on making it more circular on the far right side.... Just me.

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    Straight up. Thanks Peter.
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    Try to make your letters not look like Jell-o jigglers.

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    King. Back to bars.
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    did this last night. kust something i didnt in like 5 minutes! and crits??
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    king ever hear less is more? same applies to graff
    simple i did today

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    Less is infinitely more, until you need to know more, and you will know when that is. It isn't now.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Wonky View Post
    Thanks I think Tempo. Any crits / comments?
    to get critical,rather see that same thing in paint on canvas.
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    did this tonight.... not happy with fill..

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