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    I'd say stop drawing on trains and start making full letters.


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    @MN Nice-I like the top one,has a nice flow. But the bottom, not feeling the loops and the colours are not working for me
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    @neso sweet black book
    @naked nice page keep em comin not diggen the colors either tho but there gettin better

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    @gemer im not feel in the arrows but your hand styles fresh
    @MN Nice I'm feel in it just not the blues
    @neso i agree quit coloring trains no offence i did like the orange one though

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    Quote Originally Posted by gemer View Post
    @neso sweet black book
    @naked nice page keep em comin not diggen the colors either tho but there gettin better
    Was that meant for me? Because that was just an exchange with Naked, not what I write.

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    ha yea for you^ my bad

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    crits please, need a fair bit of improvement still
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    plus my girlfriend got mad cause i laughed when the cat was wearing glasses.

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    crits?
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    Crits, feel your letters more. Give them emotion, give them limbs. Think of them as people. Come up with a backstory, a family and medical history. n occupation. Did your letters grow up in a nice sensible suburb? Do they work in a car wash? Do they live on the streets? Think bout your letters mood and responsibilities within the set. Are they proppng up, pulling over or tangling with other letters. With their limbs make that important. Don't think of the outside, think of the underneath. The physical structure of the thing.

    For instance, if you were to draw a person would you just draw the outside and hope it turns out all right? of course not. Start with the bone structure, work out how the limbs are supposed to relate and move with each other. Flow correctly instead of unnaturally. The same applies to letters. You can't have their bones and internal organs all mooshed up funny, they will just end up looking awkward and end up with health complications. Like a Pug dog, or a Person with bone-itis.
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    plus my girlfriend got mad cause i laughed when the cat was wearing glasses.

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    Quote Originally Posted by C-SONE View Post
    Crits, feel your letters more. Give them emotion, give them limbs. Think of them as people. Come up with a backstory, a family and medical history. n occupation. Did your letters grow up in a nice sensible suburb? Do they work in a car wash? Do they live on the streets? Think bout your letters mood and responsibilities within the set. Are they proppng up, pulling over or tangling with other letters. With their limbs make that important. Don't think of the outside, think of the underneath. The physical structure of the thing..
    o...kay ?

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    haha lol ^^
    i think i could of made the "b" a little bigger, and fix the last leg of the "m" near the top
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    He's juss tryin to say letter structure is important, lol.
    c-sone i cant really give you any constructive crit on those, but i can drop ma dollar.
    perspective is kind of wierd on first one, i know what u meant to do, but it didnt came out well, s si one level above the other two. I had troubles on finding letters in second one i can see the s and o, still didnt find n and e. And i think you aint planing to bomb that. I suggest you post it in the intermediate thread, there you'll get better crits.

    @gemer shorten those arrow/extensions, try giving letters the same lean. Dont make m that "spacey" next time, you kill flow with that. Try to reduce this space with letter bars, also on down/right part of g. Overall nice work, its got potential.

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    yo that is raw do that.
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    ill stuff gem your letters are ruude n sone your styles on point with that pen game. you guys wont get much qualitative input from most of the kats in this thread imo move it to intermediate

    quick ting

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    absolutly horrible outline. playing with stuff for my end of a Slotr exchange.
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    i really like blue an yellow together! crits please!
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    Beko: Koto, Kote? T isn't bad. That K needs some work. And whatever is on the end needs medical attention. You're improving over all, but keep working on your straights and getting them to flow.

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    ya beko that k needs some work..the charecter isnt bad, in my opinion lose the splashes coming off the charecter

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    looks to me like theres a lot of rockin been going on....i had a few days off drawing... did these today


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