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    tempo - not feeling the little leg on the bottom right of the middle letter (A)?


    can i get some crits please?

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    take your time a bit more with the lines, just to neaten them up. and work on that handy a bit. keep it up though. i reckon your heading in the right direction

    Temp - lose that kick on the right side of the A
    Last edited by TBS; 01-05-2012 at 04:07 AM.
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    cheers man, i cant seem to find a pencil anywhere so thats part of the reason for the messiness. i just sketched it out with a paint pen then filled it haha.

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    eriekid it's yours ? realy all projects keep the style!

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    Quote Originally Posted by gim View Post
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    first time trying to piece, crits appreciated disregard the garbage tag lol
    bump for crits, much love
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    not bad for a simple just start making ur lines a bit straighter and cleaner and ull have a nice simple flowing

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    Sake: You're working in the right direction. Work on bar consistency (example: the legs and cross portion on the A and K). Your SAK leans (lmao that gave me a chuckle) to the left while your E stands straight up. It draws away from the flow of the piece.

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    some mo' freestyle fuq shyt
    I might stop doin 1 letter at a time. i ono
    I smoke Vega


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    Tempo: your other style is way better than this mess. The line through the middle just looks bad imo. Work with this style without the bar through the middle and try and get it flowing a little better.

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    some wackness:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tempo718 View Post
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    some mo' freestyle fuq shyt
    I might stop doin 1 letter at a time. i ono
    heres a tip... dont post your bad drawings on facebook,.... it doesnt make you k00l

    http://www.facebook.com/riley.s.brennan

    looks like you just got BROAD SIDE FED UP THE BONE BULDGE LMAO

    to prove its him look at the name of the image 400274_270138976380770_100001540101387_759614_1231 99693 thats a facebook image code, third number is profile id thank you and fuck you

    ~~post splitter wooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh~~

    o hi i drew this piece to try something is it good.....

    Last edited by spiltink; 01-05-2012 at 06:10 PM.

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    Malto what kind of markers do u use??

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    Quote Originally Posted by spiltink View Post
    heres a tip... dont post your bad drawings on facebook,.... it doesnt make you k00l

    http://www.facebook.com/riley.s.brennan

    looks like you just got BROAD SIDE FED UP THE BONE BULDGE LMAO

    to prove its him look at the name of the image 400274_270138976380770_100001540101387_759614_1231 99693 thats a facebook image code, third number is profile id thank you and fuck you

    ~~post splitter wooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh~~

    o hi i drew this piece to try something is it good.....

    WTF spilt ink u bitch you steel my piece i drew that i hate it when people take credit for work that is not theirs

    oh i caould have some crits

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    cheers for the crits PETER

    Quote Originally Posted by Fang View Post
    Malto what kind of markers do u use??
    yo, i use uni posca paint pens. needa go get some more though cause thats the only 2 colours ive got left haha

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    Quote Originally Posted by SynOne View Post
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    Dank - Getting some simps down, I'd like to see you try some fills.
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    Quote Originally Posted by spiltink View Post
    heres a tip... dont post your bad drawings on facebook,.... it doesnt make you k00l
    I have to have more patience i think ur right to say what I quoted, if I do post that type of style ever again its gonna be after I had a moment to do it right ok.
    Last edited by Tempo718; 01-06-2012 at 02:12 AM.
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    bored as hell over here. yea this dudes gon lost his hand
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    crits? lines are kinda rough cuz im using sharpies and thin ass graph paper


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    Just keep writing - over and over... dont stop. Still a bit rough...
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