got no idea what you just said about characters
quickie sketch before i pass out.. maybe you can see it.. bout to color it tomorrow
the R is busted as fuck
Those colors are illin!!^ Nice grey detail on the letters. I'm not so sure about your extensions though, you seem to be going out of your way to make them.
@dank - can't really see the letters too well, post it up inked. Thanks for the good looks on mine though.
This is what I meant by adding some more color. I think it gives it a little more movement.
[QUOTE=Wonky;1769163]A little 2B outline I did this morning
most of them letters are hurtinnn...spesh the s. little dragon face is the only thing remotely worth keepin i reckon man, anyways, half coloured. ...colourin was just quick, to be redone .
hold ya can up n stand up
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Crits on any of this? the hollow 2 letter is my fave, the finished 2 letter is pretty old so its not the best. and i put a force around the sunset naked but it sort of ruined the piece so i am just gonna upload the unruined version haha/
@colors y the upside down cross?
@wonky gettin btter keep drawing
gemer- at first it was supposed to be a devilish evil piece but i changed halfway through but i already outline that part haha
not too bad, letters are kinda weak though n seem too skinny..anyways not gonna repost the flic, but feel free to crit the picca few posts up i put on here earlier x
hold ya can up n stand up
roaches ... are ... fast
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@naked.. I like that first one a lot yo keep it up
@gerb.. those pieces are all over the place... take a step back n watch how the other kats on here have been progressing through simples and bar consistency. the throws are alright but the r aint working you dont need the extra kink in the leg... keep it up tho
Junt: go simpler on your letters and thicken them up, random ass extensions and connections are weak. And for your throw, don't connect the middle line of your b to the r, it makes it look like an e. and don't do the flat top, just keep fuckin around with it.
Colors: diggin the first piece, real nice fill. just make sure you're keeping your letters evenly spread out.
Wonk: actually feeling that top piece. Your N could've used a little more room and less space on your D and E
@ gerb drop all them extensions off those first flics
freestyle tryin something new
after looking at it a couple times on here makes me hate it
^^^haha fer sure man them letters are all different sizes....and definatly bars woulda been way better i was stoned when i did it tryin to get on a different level haha but thanks dude
Just some pen freebies testing some new stuff.
Wonky: That top piece is interesting. I like it. Run with it. I'd like to see what you do with colors.
Gemer: Dont hate it. I like the flowing vibe of it. I think it would work well with a Rime style to it.
SynOne: Both have potential. I like the top one better, but that R needs help. The R on the bottom one is looking a bit like a B.
Last edited by PETER; 01-13-2012 at 09:14 AM.