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Crits on any of this? the hollow 2 letter is my fave, the finished 2 letter is pretty old so its not the best. and i put a force around the sunset naked but it sort of ruined the piece so i am just gonna upload the unruined version haha/
@colors y the upside down cross?
@wonky gettin btter keep drawing
gemer- at first it was supposed to be a devilish evil piece but i changed halfway through but i already outline that part haha
not too bad, letters are kinda weak though n seem too skinny..anyways not gonna repost the flic, but feel free to crit the picca few posts up i put on here earlier x
hold ya can up n stand up
roaches ... are ... fast
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@naked.. I like that first one a lot yo keep it up
@gerb.. those pieces are all over the place... take a step back n watch how the other kats on here have been progressing through simples and bar consistency. the throws are alright but the r aint working you dont need the extra kink in the leg... keep it up tho
Junt: go simpler on your letters and thicken them up, random ass extensions and connections are weak. And for your throw, don't connect the middle line of your b to the r, it makes it look like an e. and don't do the flat top, just keep fuckin around with it.
Colors: diggin the first piece, real nice fill. just make sure you're keeping your letters evenly spread out.
Wonk: actually feeling that top piece. Your N could've used a little more room and less space on your D and E
@ gerb drop all them extensions off those first flics
freestyle tryin something new
after looking at it a couple times on here makes me hate it
^^^haha fer sure man them letters are all different sizes....and definatly bars woulda been way better i was stoned when i did it tryin to get on a different level haha but thanks dude
Just some pen freebies testing some new stuff.
Wonky: That top piece is interesting. I like it. Run with it. I'd like to see what you do with colors.
Gemer: Dont hate it. I like the flowing vibe of it. I think it would work well with a Rime style to it.
SynOne: Both have potential. I like the top one better, but that R needs help. The R on the bottom one is looking a bit like a B.
Last edited by PETER; 01-13-2012 at 08:14 AM.
I feel, you and agree with both, the top R was actually going to have to top loop like like the top of the S, but I fucked it up, can't undo the pen lol. As for the R looking like a B, I know, I just didn't give the leg enough room for the extension.
gettin better skewr just watch those W's, try writing EW over n over till you find a way for them to flow
syn - that 1st one there is on a new direction imo i like it.
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not gonna throw in colours till i get all the kinks worked out. the R turned out like shit and im still not stoked on the rest of it. crits would be appreciated.