not diggen this one at all
not diggen this one at all
http://www.flickr.com/photos/semeone/
Mn NIce- thats startin to look nice. don't fux with adding more color, thats as much as you need.
Syn ONe- the 2nd pic bottom piece is the best. bottom freestyles not bad, not feel in the rigid ass loop in the middle of the W, shoulda left it plain n simple
tempo- keeep practicing
my pictures kinda big..
Originally Posted by Mildstyles
dank - any a more charactors on deck yoga I could be luke pahlease g cause u got that on lock imo.
mues - your progression is consistant dont vexx. easy.
every1 else - stay ya heads up but dont post something til. it is your satisfaction.
i think going back and reanalyzing your bars and etc.
can in prove your flow if you do three in a row but something different n' more complex as you move to 1,2,3
(1) Being simple could benefit your patience also and just enjoy when you see what eventually progresses
into something a little differnt that what the 1st rendition was.
I smoke Vega
I like where he going with this uh.. mainly first one the one after is eh... but uh yeah that otha one do it 3 times in a row se post it plz?
I smoke Vega
got no idea what you just said about characters
quickie sketch before i pass out.. maybe you can see it.. bout to color it tomorrow
the R is busted as fuck
Last edited by dankbudz; 01-12-2012 at 04:37 AM.
nice seder
Those colors are illin!!^ Nice grey detail on the letters. I'm not so sure about your extensions though, you seem to be going out of your way to make them.
@dank - can't really see the letters too well, post it up inked. Thanks for the good looks on mine though.
This is what I meant by adding some more color. I think it gives it a little more movement.
[QUOTE=Wonky;1769163]A little 2B outline I did this morning
most of them letters are hurtinnn...spesh the s. little dragon face is the only thing remotely worth keepin i reckon man, anyways, half coloured....colourin was just quick, to be redone .
hold ya can up n stand up
that khan is dope
Last edited by dankbudz; 01-12-2012 at 03:12 PM.
| Liquid + Brick |
Crits on any of this? the hollow 2 letter is my fave, the finished 2 letter is pretty old so its not the best. and i put a force around the sunset naked but it sort of ruined the piece so i am just gonna upload the unruined version haha/
Lmao XD
@colors y the upside down cross?
@wonky gettin btter keep drawing
http://www.flickr.com/photos/semeone/
gemer- at first it was supposed to be a devilish evil piece but i changed halfway through but i already outline that part haha
crits on all these?
Picture 202 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr
Picture 205 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr
Picture 206 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr
Picture 207 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr
Picture 208 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr
not too bad, letters are kinda weak though n seem too skinny..anyways not gonna repost the flic, but feel free to crit the picca few posts up i put on here earlier x
hold ya can up n stand up
roaches ... are ... fast
I smoke Vega
@naked.. I like that first one a lot yo keep it up
@gerb.. those pieces are all over the place... take a step back n watch how the other kats on here have been progressing through simples and bar consistency. the throws are alright but the r aint working you dont need the extra kink in the leg... keep it up tho
Junt: go simpler on your letters and thicken them up, random ass extensions and connections are weak. And for your throw, don't connect the middle line of your b to the r, it makes it look like an e. and don't do the flat top, just keep fuckin around with it.
Colors: diggin the first piece, real nice fill. just make sure you're keeping your letters evenly spread out.
Wonk: actually feeling that top piece. Your N could've used a little more room and less space on your D and E
@ gerb drop all them extensions off those first flics
freestyle tryin something new
after looking at it a couple times on here makes me hate it
http://www.flickr.com/photos/semeone/
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