Wonky: That top piece is interesting. I like it. Run with it. I'd like to see what you do with colors.
Gemer: Dont hate it. I like the flowing vibe of it. I think it would work well with a Rime style to it.
SynOne: Both have potential. I like the top one better, but that R needs help. The R on the bottom one is looking a bit like a B.