@ wonky i call them freestyles because i dont erase
breaking this down into 3 parts. Crits are definitely welcome.
this is my piece without the outline so you can actually see the bleeding letters
This is the finished product with the forcefield, but i feel like the forcefeild ruined the whole piece
This was my favorite stage of the piece that i should not have given a bad force. Just pretend this is the finished product not the forcefield one
i like the force i think the letters pop a little more , here is one i did for the piece battle
holy poop dude that ones sick. im just not a fan of the connections, not saying they are bad i just dont like connections haha. i have no crits dude, all the letters seem nice to me, good job
yeah you're right colors that ones sickk !!
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dope naked.. your stee is so consistent, only crit I can shoot your way is the right bar of the n meets the left one a lil weird, kinda makes it look like an m but not really cause I know its an n, maybe if you dropped that bottom line of the connection so that the bar meets horizontally. dope nonetheless homie
and that cutlas is grime too, though the thin connections are extra
some exchanges tryna expand the letter vocab, crits welcome n hit me up if you wanna exchange i'm always down
kwu your style is so dope man, and i feel you on my n situation haha. only thing i can really say about yours are that i know they arent what you write, but the mokas is the dopest IMO, but the N in zeno(i think) the middle bar i just dont like the way its bent, makes it look a little weird, and the z is tilted more than the other letters. thats really all i have, keep it up man.
And if you haven'talready, go vote in the Toy Piece Battle, we only need a few more voters, so go and vote!!
Last edited by Colors; 01-22-2012 at 11:04 AM.
So long as you dont bite each other and you dont live right next to each other you're good. although i see why seder doesnt want someone writing the same thing without the last letter haha, and youve been writing since 09 and thats what you got? Dankbudz is better and probably does get up, probably more than you. and you shouldnt be getting up, because you have a long way before your stuff even looks remotely okay-ish.
Last edited by Colors; 01-22-2012 at 11:51 AM.
Good looks to Colors, dank, kwu, wgone.
Lookin for some crits on this
your M is all by itself. you should loose those extensions on the U and have the right bar extend down like a normal U or nothin, maybe straighten out the left bar too.
lol this looked cooler when it was sketched out, i like the Es sorta, without the grimy shit. i keep fuckin up the legs on the Rs lately
Simples for a whole page in the Toy bb thread?
That's dope! Keep at it all of you!