lookin for some crits on these outlines, bottom one is a semi-wild i did in my book
KRST (no 3d in this, will be going to the bottom or straight right.)
lookin for some crits on these outlines, bottom one is a semi-wild i did in my book
KRST (no 3d in this, will be going to the bottom or straight right.)
You have to know the rules before you can break them.
I should start sketching again.
honestly i dont give a fuck, youre on the other side of the world.Originally Posted by SONE.
Havent been able to sketch lately, so any and all crits welcome. i got that ugly flow ya know
not ugly flow, but your color choice is interesting. don't really like how you drew lines on other letters, the lower A and K, if it was intentional. that middle part of the K gets me every time. stick with the upper case though its got more potential
and btw i remember i still gotta finish you're exchange, been kinda lazy with finishing older stuff.
ohh yeah i remember that exchange no big deal though you dont have to do it, but yeah i remembered your last crit about the line in the middle of the k during my outline hahaha but i did it anyway because im retarded. yeah the lines were intentional, but thanks for the crits man
Meh, haven't been sketching much either. Feel free to crit.
those NK ones are funky i like the green one and purp N
Pen freeb on the train na mean
Last edited by kwu; 02-06-2012 at 08:59 PM.
bottom page.Meh, haven't been sketching much either. Feel free to crit.
kwu - that's cool, but i wouldn't have extended the bottom of the A's that much
MN nice - so i guess im not the only one who hasn't been sketching much haha, and sorry man but i don't think that looks very good, too many corners. u have put out much better work before
don't know how i should finish this one
this is a quickie i just did a couple seconds ago
ewal keep it up....kwu did you use a pen for the 3d..?
sketches from the week didnt get a chance to upload
working on a throw up....feel free to crit
shouldnt have coloured in this sketch it wrecked it
Atman - That piece is sick..
EWAL - You want to focus on using bars mate, bars bars bars until you've got bars falling out of your eyeballs when you're sad and shitting bars when you've eaten too much.
Dane - The first two throwies are nice, but the rest need alot of work. Take the second from bottom one and work on that style, it'll give you the structure you need.
Reads SKOPE, haven't posted up here in ages. Only noticed how shit the S looked after putting it on the computer. Not finished anyway, but crits would be cool..
women despite being pretty, are always problems sooner or later so if we all work together we can nip their bullshit in the bud with minimal controversy.
- anonymous
Finally changed it up a bit... still off though, gotta work my way out of this funk im in.
I dont even know
Last edited by Colors; 02-04-2012 at 03:09 PM.
working toward computer rock
"I counted my cans as I awaited my chance
Then perpetrated my plans with ink and paint on my hands"
it looks like u got somthin goin xylene but clean it up some , i like the second one colors just not how the a touchs the right side of the k , not feelin the s skope , dane the one just above the blue one is the best work with that style some more , ewal the WA by itself hass the most potential i'd say , MN looks good and kwu killin this page . Here are couple things for the battles , i hated the halo on the middle one but kinda gave up on the piece
Colors - I'm digging you are trying new things. Keep trying at the swirls. I try to keep my swirl the same size all the way through it instead of narrowing it as you go. Try both of them, it gives off different effects.
EXAMPLE :
new style im working with needs work and obviously other things aint exact but free handing shit making it looks the same isnt easy
@Skope2 i used bars on all of those
for shits
sorry for the darkness
I haven't done any writing for a long time. When i did i was generally being a 14 year old.
Crits are welcome (i realize some of the thick lines are fucked up, i wasn't agreeing with the marker plus i'm out of practice)
The name is not certain. I'm still kinda playing with a few names so we shall see how it goes.
Last edited by eipe; 02-05-2012 at 04:29 PM.
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