quick sketch dunno if i can be bothered finishing it
quick sketch dunno if i can be bothered finishing it
new stuff.
Jealousy, some say it's sickening
They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury
Originally Posted by Arose.One
tasty mcnasty those flicks are looking good eh
looooool eh
umm i did this and like idk if im a toy or what level im on yet... Give me feed baclk
hows this for throw?
and a simple i did real quick
You have to know the rules before you can break them.
can i get some crits on this? thanks
Kwu, that piece is so damn sick keep it up
Any crits for that outline ?
Any crits for this one ?
Crook - On your K's the extension just doesn't seem to work, the way you are creating it makes the bottom of it look obese. Maybe angle the extension bar so that the bottom is so fat. That might work out better for you.
Krusty - Drop the points on that throw. Go more basic with the piece and throw.
For some reason my phone made this shit look A LOT more sloppy than it is, but it's still pretty sloppy, definitely on the R and E.
Last edited by SynOne; 02-07-2012 at 03:34 PM.
Syn that s is pretty nice, but it has too many extensions. The middle bar of the W looks a little weird try turning them into normal straight bars. the bar at the top of the R can be deleted, and on your E in the middle where the bars meet try either doing a simpler e or making the E 1 outline instead of making it look like 2 things put together. Not bad but there are too many useless bars and some parts of your letters just look weird
Skewr you should try not dividing your E into 2 sections, the line through the middle ruins it in my opinion.
crits on these two?
I feel you on the E, when it wasn't divided it seemed awkward, I'll try some different things with it.
syn- remove alll those extensions and it would be cool
crook- down wrap your o's around each other and pull the C in. and just keep practicing,
don't need crits
Im going to crit you anyway. i like em they look nice actually haha you got simples down
lol i got basic structure down but I'm tryna learn to add some movement too it, which is proving to be a bitch
and you're walking the right road dude... I can see definite potential and a proper future in the way you're heading., you're going at it one step at a time, mastering each one little by litte, start to add very minor bends to your letters. italic to the right, italic to the left, extended stuff, serifs... experiment with them all but don't go crazy, keep moving nice, slow and steady and you're golden boiiiii
crook. ekra, krusty, and canteen green, you all should do what dankbudz is... take him as an example of how you should progress. I'm being frank now, I'd usually fuck with y'all, but this time I'm being very serious. it's the only way you're gonna progress.
again. that blue burn piece made my day. seeing it among all the bad stuff is kinda refreshing dude. thanks.
only comment I'd give is to make the N a tad narrower to match the width of the b, u and r
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