Blackbooks

[toopski]

crits anyone?

[dankbudz]

i think you should of made the U and M level with the ZE and maybe cut down on extensions so you coulda bent the bars a bit more
yo should i put ours in a single post in the battle thread or did you wanna color?

[toopski]

i think you should of made the U and M level with the ZE and maybe cut down on extensions so you coulda bent the bars a bit more
yo should i put ours in a single post in the battle thread or did you wanna color?

i cbf touching it was a quick freestyle

yeah tbh that z is my normal n sideways and the rest i just went with what flowed out of the hand @ the time

[dankbudz]

i feeel it

[LegitPhysics]

[Norfsuthr]

Because this site is wack as fuck and ran by toys. heres my sketch for the LIME battle. GO VOTE!

Your 3d is fucked. Those extension things on the I and M are gay. Quote marks on a piece? ok.. The arrow extension on the L works but isn't straight, the on on the E doesn't because its not round at that part like the L.

And GOD FUCKING DAMMIT physik cut that shit out.

['Crook']

Any crits on these please ?

[SynOne]

Crook - Drop that extension on the R, it covers up the O to much in the second one, and it just doesn't look so hot - Goes the same for the K.


Vanishing point is waaayy to close to the E, made it look all awkward =/ - Didn't notice the bottom right of the W is missing 3D until I posted lol.

[CliffJackson]

first sketch from my friend

crits please!
crook- those O's need work, i would try making them the same size as everything else.

[Colors]

I get a little depressed when i get on BS and realize i dont have pics of any new stuf....
but anyway
skewr-just remember to try and keep all of your bar widths the same, or atlest relatively close
crook- i think the 3rd one is the best, but the R covers the O's a lot and same with the o's covering the k. and unhook them, and try to go simpler, like the r doesnt need the extension nor does the k. and your c looks like it stands alone in the 3rd piece like its more tilted than the rest and farther apaart and alittle bigger

['Crook']

Thanks for crits !!!

[dankbudz]

postin this again...

[TastyMcNasty]

dank- that bottom one is solid, but i wanna see you do more with your style

[Krusty1]

skewr, obv move the vanishing point, and maybe change up the top right slanted line on the K and i think thats a pretty nice outline

some shit for crits


quick simple


not sure about the 3d on this, any ideas?


and this is before any 3d or anything just straight outline, i did the 3d 45 degrees to bottom left and i looked alright after though

[canteen green]

Attachment 53949 mods u can delete the pencil sketch

wats rong with this? can i get some crits i know i colerd it wack but besides that

['Crook']

Can someone give me crits please ??

[killroywashere]

[Krusty1]

killroy that bottom piece is ok, but the O and N dont really fit with the rest of it

[dankbudz]

Krusty- do stuff like the green one and avoid things like your other 2 sketches

Tasty- i can't do much with my style, cause i don't really got any thing good going style wise, usually turns into shit

simp sketch, crits?
i think all i gotta fix is the R, slant it more and maybe put a lil bit of curve in the Rs vert. leg and fix the horizontal leg cuz its kinda gay

[Colors]

just widen the bar in the middle of the E, and yea do your R thing. You should start tweaking your letters, we all know you got simples down lol