I also critiqued his work several posts earlier... facepalm.
I also critiqued his work several posts earlier... facepalm.
this is why i shouldn't use the internet why i;m high hahah
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Originally Posted by Arose.One
damn that naked is ill only crit I have is the right leg of the k could be a bit fatter but other than that flow n structure is on point
Get rid of those arrows and straighten out them letter man
Yooooo ok so i fixed up my peice give feedback
also to anyone asking yehs im Australian
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I was looking at that shit backward man my b but your letters still need a lot more structureYooooo ok so i fixed up my peice give feedback
also to anyone asking yehs im Australian
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Before
Cheer's i think the top of d looks to long?
@ sol keep practicing ur gettin the hang of it
@ dank go even more simple than that and get rid of them crazy extensions and checks lol
@ naked stilll the sameeeeeeee as always lol keep em comin tho man
http://www.flickr.com/photos/semeone/
Lol that arrow coming off the D is my favorite. Sorry man, thats just some classic shit hahaha
I see what you're going for but you arent ready to put style into it like that. Definitely go simpler, and make that D taller rather than wide.
ya dank id just make the D and N a little bit thinner, fix the bottom left end of the N so its more like the original one, and thats not a bad outline, it def looks better without the arrows
You have to know the rules before you can break them.
haha ddont know wut i was thinking on this one not liken it at all
http://www.flickr.com/photos/semeone/
lol theres a person who writes dank in my city he dogged a piece but they went over his dog
@Tasty I think that sketch is pretty dope man.
Light blue marker ran out on me while doing it so had to use this messed up color blend.
^ Still over doing it. Do more shit like what Phat posted a page or so back. Or this.
Thanks norf for all the crits, i feel you on all the points you hit. And thanks kwu haha but your steeze far exceeds mine, we should exchange. Gemer, i really tried on this one to make it different lol.
Okay simple it is. Was actually a lot harder than I thought...
daas guud.
just keep on a consistent base line, and don't cover your E with the D
exchanges n' junk. all m s's are the same.
@Colors that SOL piece is dank man.
I know i didn't do simple but i just got some great bud and them ideas started flowin..
Cred, you're gonna have to do the shit like Dank does, you got to do simples... A HELL OF A LOT OF SIMPLES. Once you got them down you can start with bending, then extensions.
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