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    got structure, id like to see the left leg of the N continue farther down and less connections, make it bumpp hah
    digging the 3d you got. I'm bout to post up the beautiful piece later today.
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    heres another one

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    Crit the top one (yeah I know the R is shit), bottom one is was just for shits n gigz.

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    Skewr- work on that R in the colored one. In the sketch, lose the gay little thing on top of the R, you know better than that man. I'd also bring out the bottom of the W instead of hiding behind itself.
    Dank- im feeling that anex.
    Mori im lovin your style but the O is too open i think.


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    Quote Originally Posted by dankbudz View Post
    got structure, id like to see the left leg of the N continue farther down and less connections, make it bumpp hah
    digging the 3d you got. I'm bout to post up the beautiful piece later today.
    yes. that farm one is actually sick, excluding the top part of the R.

    working on a banger, or at least one that i think is
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    Yeah Norf I knew the R was fucked, on the top of the R on the bottom one was suppose to be the connection to the guys chain, the whole piece was suppose to be his chain, I didn't pull it off to well.

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    Critz please? I know it's a bit whop-sided.

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    here's a quick phone flick of the work in progress/
    Jealousy, some say it's sickening
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    Quote Originally Posted by Arose.One View Post
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    Have you tried working with a capital N? It might be the answer to filling the negative space and not need those extra bars to fill it in. Finish that though and post it up.

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    quick question to all you toys in this thread.
    when it comes to lettering, is this shit hard for you nigaz? or can you do similar stuff?
    Depends, simples allllll day. I honestly enjoy the fuck outta simples.

    And Tasty you're looking like you're progressing nicely

    Also crits on these?
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    Coleo are you using paint and brush, or is that a pen?
    Ever heard of a fucking mop?

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    ^ I like the last one, middle bar of the S needs to be thicker though

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    Quote Originally Posted by TastyMcNasty View Post
    here's a quick phone flick of the work in progress/
    always seem to hit the bottom of the page >:[

    Quote Originally Posted by MN Nice View Post
    Have you tried working with a capital N? It might be the answer to filling the negative space and not need those extra bars to fill it in. Finish that though and post it up.
    ya, i hate capital N's, so i don't even bother hahah.
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    Quote Originally Posted by lostyoursense View Post
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    bumping from the other page

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    I dont even know what im doing. Crits on this?
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    The E throws it off, its also a little too big. I feel like one of those 3 type of e's, but with points and stuff to fit your style, would look good. The bottom of the vertical bar in the D doesn't look great, the bottom right of the N got too fat. Overall i think it looks ok, just trying to point out issues to help.

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    Yeah thanks Norf and I was thinking the same thing haha. Gonna work on it!
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    Ever heard of a fucking mop?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shit Outta Luck View Post
    Yeah thanks Norf and I was thinking the same thing haha. Gonna work on it!
    he was criting naked *facepalm*
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    Quote Originally Posted by Arose.One View Post
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    I also critiqued his work several posts earlier... facepalm.

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    this is why i shouldn't use the internet why i;m high hahah
    Jealousy, some say it's sickening
    They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury


    Quote Originally Posted by Arose.One View Post
    do your outline in goat's blood and pray to the dark lord

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    damn that naked is ill only crit I have is the right leg of the k could be a bit fatter but other than that flow n structure is on point


 

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