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    Critz please? I know it's a bit whop-sided.

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    here's a quick phone flick of the work in progress/
    Jealousy, some say it's sickening
    They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury


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    do your outline in goat's blood and pray to the dark lord

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    Have you tried working with a capital N? It might be the answer to filling the negative space and not need those extra bars to fill it in. Finish that though and post it up.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Phat 2 View Post
    quick question to all you toys in this thread.
    when it comes to lettering, is this shit hard for you nigaz? or can you do similar stuff?
    Depends, simples allllll day. I honestly enjoy the fuck outta simples.

    And Tasty you're looking like you're progressing nicely

    Also crits on these?
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    Coleo are you using paint and brush, or is that a pen?
    Ever heard of a fucking mop?

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    ^ I like the last one, middle bar of the S needs to be thicker though

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    Quote Originally Posted by TastyMcNasty View Post
    here's a quick phone flick of the work in progress/
    always seem to hit the bottom of the page >:[

    Quote Originally Posted by MN Nice View Post
    Have you tried working with a capital N? It might be the answer to filling the negative space and not need those extra bars to fill it in. Finish that though and post it up.
    ya, i hate capital N's, so i don't even bother hahah.
    Jealousy, some say it's sickening
    They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury


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    do your outline in goat's blood and pray to the dark lord

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    Quote Originally Posted by lostyoursense View Post
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    bumping from the other page

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    I dont even know what im doing. Crits on this?
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    The E throws it off, its also a little too big. I feel like one of those 3 type of e's, but with points and stuff to fit your style, would look good. The bottom of the vertical bar in the D doesn't look great, the bottom right of the N got too fat. Overall i think it looks ok, just trying to point out issues to help.

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    Yeah thanks Norf and I was thinking the same thing haha. Gonna work on it!
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    Coleo are you using paint and brush, or is that a pen?
    Ever heard of a fucking mop?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shit Outta Luck View Post
    Yeah thanks Norf and I was thinking the same thing haha. Gonna work on it!
    he was criting naked *facepalm*
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    Quote Originally Posted by Arose.One View Post
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    I also critiqued his work several posts earlier... facepalm.

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    this is why i shouldn't use the internet why i;m high hahah
    Jealousy, some say it's sickening
    They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury


    Quote Originally Posted by Arose.One View Post
    do your outline in goat's blood and pray to the dark lord

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    damn that naked is ill only crit I have is the right leg of the k could be a bit fatter but other than that flow n structure is on point

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    Quote Originally Posted by DankOner View Post
    Yooooo ok so i fixed up my peice give feedback
    also to anyone asking yehs im Australian
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    Get rid of those arrows and straighten out them letter man

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    Yooooo ok so i fixed up my peice give feedback
    also to anyone asking yehs im Australian
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    Quote Originally Posted by DankOner View Post
    Yooooo ok so i fixed up my peice give feedback
    also to anyone asking yehs im Australian
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    I was looking at that shit backward man my b but your letters still need a lot more structure

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    Quote Originally Posted by lostyoursense View Post
    I was looking at that shit backward man my b but your letters still need a lot more structure
    Cheer's i think the top of d looks to long?

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    @ sol keep practicing ur gettin the hang of it
    @ dank go even more simple than that and get rid of them crazy extensions and checks lol
    @ naked stilll the sameeeeeeee as always lol keep em comin tho man
    SEMK ONE

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    Lol that arrow coming off the D is my favorite. Sorry man, thats just some classic shit hahaha

    I see what you're going for but you arent ready to put style into it like that. Definitely go simpler, and make that D taller rather than wide.


 

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