heres another one
Crit the top one (yeah I know the R is shit), bottom one is was just for shits n gigz.
Skewr- work on that R in the colored one. In the sketch, lose the gay little thing on top of the R, you know better than that man. I'd also bring out the bottom of the W instead of hiding behind itself.
Dank- im feeling that anex.
Mori im lovin your style but the O is too open i think.
Im having a graffiti identity crisis, trying some new names...
Yeah Norf I knew the R was fucked, on the top of the R on the bottom one was suppose to be the connection to the guys chain, the whole piece was suppose to be his chain, I didn't pull it off to well.
Critz please? I know it's a bit whop-sided.
Have you tried working with a capital N? It might be the answer to filling the negative space and not need those extra bars to fill it in. Finish that though and post it up.
^ I like the last one, middle bar of the S needs to be thicker though
I dont even know what im doing. Crits on this?
The E throws it off, its also a little too big. I feel like one of those 3 type of e's, but with points and stuff to fit your style, would look good. The bottom of the vertical bar in the D doesn't look great, the bottom right of the N got too fat. Overall i think it looks ok, just trying to point out issues to help.
I also critiqued his work several posts earlier... facepalm.
damn that naked is ill only crit I have is the right leg of the k could be a bit fatter but other than that flow n structure is on point