@phatty the point on the V is too dramatic, throwin off the vibe of throw cause its the first letter and the bottom doesnt match. The placement of the E is in a tricky spot, specifically the middle line. Dont let the middle line of the E touch the V, it will make it look better, BUT, if you made the line go a tad bit farther, into the V, it would also look better. First couple times i looked I didnt notice te O and N being the same letter, and thats a good thing. Lastly the bulb on the right most part of the M is kinda weird, Id play with the shape and size of that part, and try to find something that doesnt throw off the balance, and doesnt look like it could be a letter, cause with the way u did the N-O, the M could easily be percieved as an M-O. ya dig?
@physh I like the shroom fill, but be cool on all those weird add ons like on the R and K, keep playing with bending bars like ya doin, and slowly add some curvy bends in there instead of it all being sharp angles, but be subtle, and dont go overboard
VVVVVVVV this too