seder, looking good. Nice clean letters!
cred, getting better, although I'd rather see you focus on letter structure some more instead of relying on the colours so much to make it look fresh.
Colors, pretty sick stuff as well! I think it would look good if you wouldn't colour in the empty space inbetween the letters completely. Rather apply a 3d to it.
Just a quickie because this thread hasnt moved at all today...all the markers were dying that i used.
And oh yeah DANE
And my quickie
kilroy- id cool it down on extensions n add ons and find solid structure behind those letters. then it'll look dope, the stuff you painted had mad potential but alota little things took away from it.
Naked- looking good, the asia is dope. could be improved, but anything can be improved lola
beautiful and atma, covered the A too much but ohwell
and nice beautiful
@Dank Good shit, how do you make your lines so clean?
@Hela I don't use color to not work on letter structure, i use color to practice using color haha.
@ dank nice clean lines on that seconed peice also r u a girl? haha
@ cred work on the d' man still looks like an o' to much
Yeah it's just tough to pull off without using extensions/bends. Running out of simple ideas.
Cred - thanks man...i dunno just take your time i suppose
Gemer - no i'm not a girl ha...what made you think that?
did this just there don't mind the coloring i was just seeing the difference between my markers
i sorta agree it didn't need that extra piece on the side but the character is sick...........
REK CREW Beirut
yeah I know fuck me right? I totally agree with everything ribcage said... but those are whatever, I was bored. wouldn't mind crits on the throw though, if any
crits anyone...... would be helpful...............
the throwie i think is sick, but i'm a toy what do know...lol
Last edited by Phat 2; 02-19-2012 at 07:01 PM.
REK CREW Beirut
@phatty the point on the V is too dramatic, throwin off the vibe of throw cause its the first letter and the bottom doesnt match. The placement of the E is in a tricky spot, specifically the middle line. Dont let the middle line of the E touch the V, it will make it look better, BUT, if you made the line go a tad bit farther, into the V, it would also look better. First couple times i looked I didnt notice te O and N being the same letter, and thats a good thing. Lastly the bulb on the right most part of the M is kinda weird, Id play with the shape and size of that part, and try to find something that doesnt throw off the balance, and doesnt look like it could be a letter, cause with the way u did the N-O, the M could easily be percieved as an M-O. ya dig?
@physh I like the shroom fill, but be cool on all those weird add ons like on the R and K, keep playing with bending bars like ya doin, and slowly add some curvy bends in there instead of it all being sharp angles, but be subtle, and dont go overboard
VVVVVVVV this too
thanks ribcage, but that V has been giving me hellllll to figure out in terms of throw. it's kinda obligatory to make its bottom pointy or else it's a U... think you got a solution?
in my opinion, I can make the point less dramatic by making the two sides (the heart shaped bends ones) bigger and fatter maybe that helps? and yeah I get what you mean at the end of the M, and I also see that the m is much wider compared to the rest of the letters, but it's the last letter, so I feel like I can go a bit nuts with it without compromising the whole throwie's consistency... I'll make the bump at the end smaller.
anyway, here's a couple flicks from physh. he couldn't upload them himself cause his blackbook's at my place. so here they are based on his request. he'd like crits too please.
lol... anything else mr. physh? can I get you a drink or something to eat? are you warm enough? do you need me to send you a heater or snything?
heh just messin around man. it's no bother