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    lol this ni99a stays gettin up

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    Quote Originally Posted by Phat 2 View Post
    thanks ribcage, but that V has been giving me hellllll to figure out in terms of throw. it's kinda obligatory to make its bottom pointy or else it's a U... think you got a solution?
    in my opinion, I can make the point less dramatic by making the two sides (the heart shaped bends ones) bigger and fatter maybe that helps? and yeah I get what you mean at the end of the M, and I also see that the m is much wider compared to the rest of the letters, but it's the last letter, so I feel like I can go a bit nuts with it without compromising the whole throwie's consistency... I'll make the bump at the end smaller.

    anyway, here's a couple flicks from physh. he couldn't upload them himself cause his blackbook's at my place. so here they are based on his request. he'd like crits too please.
    lol... anything else mr. physh? can I get you a drink or something to eat? are you warm enough? do you need me to send you a heater or snything?
    heh just messin around man. it's no bother



    thanks for uploading em bro, and actually i would like a cheese at heart burger from Roadsters.......... oh yeah, i really wouldn't mind tricks at all.............
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    why the fuck would i write tricks instead of crits............ ahh too early in the damn morning...
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    its past your bed time get to bed or ill get daddy

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    @Criscros: Next to maybe going back to slightly simpler letters to start with, work on your inking. Your lines are far from tight. Go over your pencil outlines in a nice, smooth flow. You can practice this by printing other writers' sketches in greyscale and going over their outlines with your black pen.

    @Physh: Try to make the lines of your letters a little less straight, go for more flow in your letterstructure. To practice this, try to recreate some of the flows you like from other writers. Also, get your 3D effects to either go in the exact same direction, or to the same vanishing point. There's not shame in using a ruler to see where the lines are supposed to go! Finally, same as Criscros (especially in your Ill Bill sketch): tighten up your outlines. The Bill character is pretty cool, though.

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    Crits ?

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    Atleast bite from someone better. Lol
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    ^lolololol

    a few just for the outline, crits?


    the same but a little different, color is just there to show the outline better and no 3d yet. im feeling the bottom one more, but i think the gap between the 2 side bars of the U should go away


    pretty simple krst outline, not sure about using the 3d to the side though
    You have to know the rules before you can break them.

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    Quote Originally Posted by 4menace2society0 View Post
    lol this ni99a stays gettin up
    yo sear! this cat is burning you bro. i bet you be glad you aint in his city.

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    Breaking in the new sketchbook



    @colors - lol

    @crook - Only thing I don't like about it is the F going above the i. otherwise it aint half bad.

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    damn...that E <3

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    @MUES Digging the highlights man, and that E is perfect.

    Went a little less simple just for this one

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    lols at naked givin the fool shit

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    The fool is a fool

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    crits? I think I know some but still

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    "Game recognize game and you lookin' kinda unfamiliar right now." - Riley Freeman

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    Coleo are you using paint and brush, or is that a pen?
    Ever heard of a fucking mop?

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    Bottom one is crispy! Middle one has potential, the S is all good, the o needs to be closed up more, and I would say do an extension on the L to match the S. Scrap that top one though

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    Thanks dude and I knew I needed ta close up the O a bit more! But what kinda extension could I put on the L? I can never think of any to put on the top of the L.
    "Game recognize game and you lookin' kinda unfamiliar right now." - Riley Freeman

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    Coleo are you using paint and brush, or is that a pen?
    Ever heard of a fucking mop?

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    Theres only two that I fuck with, one that pops off the top to the left, and the one i was thinking of for your piece was one coming off the shorter leg that pops off to the right.

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    Please give all feedback Dank:
    i know the k isnt that great but improving.
    NOW:

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    Dude none of the letters is great go a lot more simple than that , write keybord letters !!


 

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