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    Why would I throw them out? I want to develop a piecing style just as much as I want to do throw ups and these are my first attempts at a slightly different style, I liked the (very few) crits I got which were actually constructive and motivational

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    I'm not trying to ruin your motivation just being brutally honest those suck you have to crawl before you can walk and walk before you run you need to go to simple styles before piecing throw them out stasprt fresh with straight letters that are actually legible

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    Because the key to developing a style is working with words as they are now. You get a full understanding of their structure by doing simples. From then on, you bend the bars, add extensions, try different fonts, whatever. You're pieces you posted are junk, theres no structure to your letters, they're completely cramped together, and it just looks plain ugly. If you stick to it, which half of the kids don't because simples get boring or they get in trouble or blah blah blah, then you'll get better. Now shut the fuck up and take the advice.

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    I am just backup on this whole thing. ^ Hell yeeea ^^^^^^^^
    Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.

    Quote Originally Posted by PETER View Post
    Kill your self isn't a crit
    Quote Originally Posted by quicksilver_slick View Post
    You got that Down Syndrome meets Parkinsons style homie

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    ^^mm haha

    Any critz for the shit I posted?

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    Sense - make the circles in your 3d completed circles. turning them into ovals usually works if you run out of room

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    Quote Originally Posted by lostyoursense View Post
    bottom page bump
    I'm not liking the arrows coming off the S and E. The disconnect in the N looks out of place, and don't put that [ thing on it.

    Naked- it looks like 12d or md. Just fix that part of the N and itll be good.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Norfsuthr View Post
    I'm not liking the arrows coming off the S and E. The disconnect in the N looks out of place, and don't put that [ thing on it.

    Naked- it looks like 12d or md. Just fix that part of the N and itll be good.
    All the samemshit I thought when I was drawing it haha thanksm

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    Did this in 3 minutes just cause i wanted another top page...haha
    Thanks norf, this is another 12a
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    Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.

    Quote Originally Posted by PETER View Post
    Kill your self isn't a crit
    Quote Originally Posted by quicksilver_slick View Post
    You got that Down Syndrome meets Parkinsons style homie

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    That would have been a very intelligent criticism if you hadn't told me to shut the fuck up at the end. I will definitely work my way up from straights before I connect my letters. Mildstyles, I think you could elaborate more on your crits. Thanks *****s

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    I didnt crit anything, i just agreed that whole page
    Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.

    Quote Originally Posted by PETER View Post
    Kill your self isn't a crit
    Quote Originally Posted by quicksilver_slick View Post
    You got that Down Syndrome meets Parkinsons style homie

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    Yes my point exactly. At least I'm glad that people are being honest, its hard showing people in real life because most artists I know either don't care or are too polite
    Last edited by Dossbog; 02-29-2012 at 09:09 PM.

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    I'm not critting your junk, sense and MN said everything that needed to be said
    Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.

    Quote Originally Posted by PETER View Post
    Kill your self isn't a crit
    Quote Originally Posted by quicksilver_slick View Post
    You got that Down Syndrome meets Parkinsons style homie

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    So why say anything at all? Either way I'm taking the actual crits i received to heart and starting over basic

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    I am the backup, making sure you understand my friend.
    I am there for you to understand you need to go simple, because that's exactly what i was thinking and im not going to type exactly what they just said.
    Meow.
    Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.

    Quote Originally Posted by PETER View Post
    Kill your self isn't a crit
    Quote Originally Posted by quicksilver_slick View Post
    You got that Down Syndrome meets Parkinsons style homie

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    Also, if anyone really feels generous and wants to help a toy out, I'd be stoked on a rzst sketch done by someone else for inspiration

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    I don't even mean to argue with you, it's just hard to accept agreement of criticism without receiving any actual additional criticism, I know you're trying to help.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mildstyles View Post
    Did this in 3 minutes just cause i wanted another top page...haha
    Thanks norf, this is another 12a
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    ur N looks like a fucked up M

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    you did receive criticism draw straight letters long story short

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    Don't bite this shit.
    And don't start pointing your bars all of a sudden.
    Got bored.
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    Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.

    Quote Originally Posted by PETER View Post
    Kill your self isn't a crit
    Quote Originally Posted by quicksilver_slick View Post
    You got that Down Syndrome meets Parkinsons style homie


 

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