Dont hate i am tired and bored
couple of quick sketches ARI (for my bitchhh)
I know, simple.simple.simple
-just your average neighborhood Spiderman
ok i dont get this. we post our work on here to get feed back but all it is in negative. oh your flow is off oh your k doesnt fit with your s your style is wack blah blah blah. ive guys who are "kings" with whack styles and guys with solid flow to be know as "toys" this doesnt make any sense. honestly style is a personal choice i just think its bullshit that when someone posts somethin even if its actually some what good people still dump on it. its just confusing thats all im saying because i would actually like to evolve to be better sometime in my life and i think i actually have a solid flow and style. most will not agree but whatever all i want is some feedback that is somewhat helpful.
there is a reason for that. Flow is a foundation not a matter of oppinion really. read the new to graffiti thread front to back. every post.
Graff J up - BARS BARS BARS
for the round robin shizzle
drew very high
Crits on mine?
That's my rant for the day.
@ s33on - you can take the advice and crits or leave it, its up to you man! i just think its important to understand what works and what doesnt, and people on the internet are real quick to tell you what doesnt. on the flip side, the better you get the more people will notice.
@ sadg - i'm digging the style on the second pic a lot, but on the R tighten up those arrows if you want to use em. on the bottom right its noticable that it will never come to a true point, work on making sure if it will be an arrow that it could potentially connect - even if its off the page.
just screwing around, i really like the E, if any of this looks bit let me know, first attempt at a sketch, also i know nothing really matches style wise
Just messin around a bit kind of shitty, but a sketch none theless. @CRED thanks for the crits on my last one. what did you mean about the baseline or whatever (NEUS by the way)
@Neus no problem. When you do your sketch start by taking a straight edge and drawing a line and make your letters sit on it, it helps a good bit. and thicken up them bars!
Thanks man. Im gonna try that heres another I just did before I read that lol ignore the circles under the s I dont know what the fuck I was doin
^^^ s' doesnt fit with the rest and the weird black cloud is pretty random.. keep drawing man ull get it