sitegraff, your characters might have potential if you work on them... try to do some minimalistic simple candy style characs... like kidrobot's for example. might work out for you
as for your actual graff stuff (letters) not so much, just like a lot of peeps here, you're starting wrong. the new to graff thread might help. hanging out and lurking for crits might also help. but one thing you need to do for sure is: stop what you're doing with your letters and stop using your methods and stick around to find out how to build your letters all over again. you're gonna have to start fresh if you want to get somewhere..
Nana, welcome to the forums, hope the guys here don't scare you away with their dicks.. you gotta understand, they don't see many females around these parts so youre something new and exciting to them, that confuses them...
Last edited by Phat 2; 03-04-2012 at 04:44 PM.
few randoms here. stop character ideas and the sketches are kinda new for me. trying to figure out colours
.lets just get to the violence.
the last one is very interesting, I can definitely see something like that as a clean ass wildstyle with details, an insane color scheme, 3D and background on some nice freshly painted wall... would burn hotter than a forest fire dude..
but if you could have properly structured letters in there rather than just random shapes, it would be much better
thanks dude. i know my letters are fucked at times. just trying out a bunch of things. i kinda dig that third one i posted up.
.lets just get to the violence.
I like the style but yeah i'd say a little structure needed.
trying to be clean and simple still
Asis13 - that monkey is tight and i agree with phat and cred
Cred - that looks good, but i like the red one more
^^^ clean now add shape
*SAVE 5 POINTZ*
F.Y.E. KRU (Fuk You Expekt)
something i did over the weekend, its supposed to say New Jersey, letters are to crowded for my liking
bombing is a poor mans game, if you live above the poverty line we hatin!
i rike crits prease
Treat suckas like paint so call me turpentine; Removin motha-f**kas from the surface, and I'll rob your home land like the Mississippi purchase.........
need to go back through and clean up the outline. The A is too small. crits beside the mentioned issues?
Cred: You are progressing nicely. One of the quickest I've seen on here. Keep rockin.
Last edited by PETER; 03-05-2012 at 11:45 AM.
antik that black tag is illy
its not a black book but its a belt buckle i made
Atma: Thanks man. I'm trying to work on a piece style based on that hand. Your style is coming along really well.
Atma, Mori, Sear, Seder, Venom, Hipster, any intermediate cats got suggestions on my piece/style?
Last edited by PETER; 03-05-2012 at 01:36 PM.
@Doss Looks like the far left character is just a big pair of balls (Can't unsee it)
@PETER thanks man, just taking peoples advice and sketching all i can. Try putting your 3d fill down before you trace your outline or retrace your outline after so that it looks like it was added at the end. I'm assuming you did it like that because you have a similar silver pen to me and you cant really write on the ink once it dries, which sucks. Other that that im digging it man, keep it up.
@Stein the middle point on the W looks weird, dont make it go off to a point like that.
@Hipster I'm not at a good enough skill leve to make crits on that, it's too dope haha.
the 3d was originally purple... I wish I would have left it. The silver I can't go back over without a black paint marker. Thanks for the kind words. Your progress is motivating me to spend more time drawing. 60hr work weeks plus practicing for a few dj show is keeping me super busy.
Peter, nice concept with the letters. If you cut your lines for sharper corners and go with something other then focal 3d you'd have somethinggoing and I'd loose the spikes you added on the purple aura