Blackbooks

[Zookyook]

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the homies

theres a big writer in la named guer... tko... also...

lolz

freestyle on a paper towel
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u neva used somethin so fresh n so clean to wipe ur ass with! lol

[cred1384]

@Physh - loving how you used your bars., good shit.

Trying to keep my shit simple and cleann

[kwu]

bump..lol

theres a big writer in la named guer... tko... also...

lolz

and a quickie

[Phat 2]

sitegraff, your characters might have potential if you work on them... try to do some minimalistic simple candy style characs... like kidrobot's for example. might work out for you
as for your actual graff stuff (letters) not so much, just like a lot of peeps here, you're starting wrong. the new to graff thread might help. hanging out and lurking for crits might also help. but one thing you need to do for sure is: stop what you're doing with your letters and stop using your methods and stick around to find out how to build your letters all over again. you're gonna have to start fresh if you want to get somewhere..

Nana, welcome to the forums, hope the guys here don't scare you away with their dicks.. you gotta understand, they don't see many females around these parts so youre something new and exciting to them, that confuses them...

[Asis13]

few randoms here. stop character ideas and the sketches are kinda new for me. trying to figure out colours

[Phat 2]

the last one is very interesting, I can definitely see something like that as a clean ass wildstyle with details, an insane color scheme, 3D and background on some nice freshly painted wall... would burn hotter than a forest fire dude..
but if you could have properly structured letters in there rather than just random shapes, it would be much better

[Asis13]

thanks dude. i know my letters are fucked at times. just trying out a bunch of things. i kinda dig that third one i posted up.

[cred1384]

I like the style but yeah i'd say a little structure needed.

trying to be clean and simple still

[NanaKillsKMC]

theres a big writer in la named guer... tko... also...

lolz

u neva used somethin so fresh n so clean to wipe ur ass with! lol

oh u want titties lol ill post my grandmas titties mine are off limits im married!!!

[EWL24]

Asis13 - that monkey is tight and i agree with phat and cred
Cred - that looks good, but i like the red one more

crits please

[NanaKillsKMC]

^^^ clean now add shape

[DEMPO]

["PHYSH"]

Physh - like the concept, but the S is a lil off the bars are smaller then the other letters.
Site - go to the new to graffiti thread and read it forward backward from the right to the left from left to right. And post then what you made

thanks sadgeh, appreciate the crits and found the other comment funny as fuck.....

[HipsterPunks]

something i did over the weekend, its supposed to say New Jersey, letters are to crowded for my liking

[Dossbog]

i rike crits prease

[PETER]

need to go back through and clean up the outline. The A is too small. crits beside the mentioned issues?



Cred: You are progressing nicely. One of the quickest I've seen on here. Keep rockin.

[kwu]

antik that black tag is illy

[stien]

its not a black book but its a belt buckle i made

[PETER]

Atma: Thanks man. I'm trying to work on a piece style based on that hand. Your style is coming along really well.

Atma, Mori, Sear, Seder, Venom, Hipster, any intermediate cats got suggestions on my piece/style?

[cred1384]

Asis13 - that monkey is tight and i agree with phat and cred
Cred - that looks good, but i like the red one more

crits please

@Ewal Super clean! Good shit man
@Doss Looks like the far left character is just a big pair of balls (Can't unsee it)
@PETER thanks man, just taking peoples advice and sketching all i can. Try putting your 3d fill down before you trace your outline or retrace your outline after so that it looks like it was added at the end. I'm assuming you did it like that because you have a similar silver pen to me and you cant really write on the ink once it dries, which sucks. Other that that im digging it man, keep it up.
@Stein the middle point on the W looks weird, dont make it go off to a point like that.
@Hipster I'm not at a good enough skill leve to make crits on that, it's too dope haha.