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    I like the style but yeah i'd say a little structure needed.

    trying to be clean and simple still

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zookyook View Post
    theres a big writer in la named guer... tko... also...
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    u neva used somethin so fresh n so clean to wipe ur ass with! lol
    oh u want titties lol ill post my grandmas titties mine are off limits im married!!!

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    Asis13 - that monkey is tight and i agree with phat and cred
    Cred - that looks good, but i like the red one more

    crits please
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    ^^^ clean now add shape

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    *SAVE 5 POINTZ*
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    Quote Originally Posted by sadgeh View Post
    Physh - like the concept, but the S is a lil off the bars are smaller then the other letters.
    Site - go to the new to graffiti thread and read it forward backward from the right to the left from left to right. And post then what you made
    thanks sadgeh, appreciate the crits and found the other comment funny as fuck.....
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    something i did over the weekend, its supposed to say New Jersey, letters are to crowded for my liking
    bombing is a poor mans game, if you live above the poverty line we hatin!

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    i rike crits prease
    Treat suckas like paint so call me turpentine; Removin motha-f**kas from the surface, and I'll rob your home land like the Mississippi purchase.........

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    Cred: You are progressing nicely. One of the quickest I've seen on here. Keep rockin.
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    antik that black tag is illy


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    its not a black book but its a belt buckle i made Name:  IMG_0252.jpg
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    Atma: Thanks man. I'm trying to work on a piece style based on that hand. Your style is coming along really well.

    Atma, Mori, Sear, Seder, Venom, Hipster, any intermediate cats got suggestions on my piece/style?
    Last edited by PETER; 03-05-2012 at 01:36 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by EWL24 View Post
    Asis13 - that monkey is tight and i agree with phat and cred
    Cred - that looks good, but i like the red one more

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    @Ewal Super clean! Good shit man
    @Doss Looks like the far left character is just a big pair of balls (Can't unsee it)
    @PETER thanks man, just taking peoples advice and sketching all i can. Try putting your 3d fill down before you trace your outline or retrace your outline after so that it looks like it was added at the end. I'm assuming you did it like that because you have a similar silver pen to me and you cant really write on the ink once it dries, which sucks. Other that that im digging it man, keep it up.
    @Stein the middle point on the W looks weird, dont make it go off to a point like that.
    @Hipster I'm not at a good enough skill leve to make crits on that, it's too dope haha.

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    the 3d was originally purple... I wish I would have left it. The silver I can't go back over without a black paint marker. Thanks for the kind words. Your progress is motivating me to spend more time drawing. 60hr work weeks plus practicing for a few dj show is keeping me super busy.

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    Peter, nice concept with the letters. If you cut your lines for sharper corners and go with something other then focal 3d you'd have somethinggoing and I'd loose the spikes you added on the purple aura

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    With that belt buckle you have no swag.
    PETER - The M is also too little. On the whole sketch its going a lil from big too little but maybe i dont see it right.

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    Couple new ones

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    @Neus Lookin better, make sure you keep your bars even on that S

    Too hungover to keep my lines crisp on this one... tried to keep it simple

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    Keep sketching cred.


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    looking good hipster and kwu,
    you're characters are the shit hipster.
    Peter-Id of made them same height, thicken the bars of a few of em and make a few of the Letters bigger to match the J. i think it would look pretty dope then.
    mues- thats looking nice

    photo booth never captures the colors right
    don't really like where i went with this... only like the E and D
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