Atma: Thanks man. I'm trying to work on a piece style based on that hand. Your style is coming along really well.
Atma, Mori, Sear, Seder, Venom, Hipster, any intermediate cats got suggestions on my piece/style?
Atma: Thanks man. I'm trying to work on a piece style based on that hand. Your style is coming along really well.
Atma, Mori, Sear, Seder, Venom, Hipster, any intermediate cats got suggestions on my piece/style?
Last edited by PETER; 03-05-2012 at 01:36 PM.
@Ewal Super clean! Good shit manOriginally Posted by EWL24
@Doss Looks like the far left character is just a big pair of balls (Can't unsee it)
@PETER thanks man, just taking peoples advice and sketching all i can. Try putting your 3d fill down before you trace your outline or retrace your outline after so that it looks like it was added at the end. I'm assuming you did it like that because you have a similar silver pen to me and you cant really write on the ink once it dries, which sucks. Other that that im digging it man, keep it up.
@Stein the middle point on the W looks weird, dont make it go off to a point like that.
@Hipster I'm not at a good enough skill leve to make crits on that, it's too dope haha.
the 3d was originally purple... I wish I would have left it. The silver I can't go back over without a black paint marker. Thanks for the kind words. Your progress is motivating me to spend more time drawing. 60hr work weeks plus practicing for a few dj show is keeping me super busy.
Peter, nice concept with the letters. If you cut your lines for sharper corners and go with something other then focal 3d you'd have somethinggoing and I'd loose the spikes you added on the purple aura
With that belt buckle you have no swag.
PETER - The M is also too little. On the whole sketch its going a lil from big too little but maybe i dont see it right.
Couple new ones
@Neus Lookin better, make sure you keep your bars even on that S
Too hungover to keep my lines crisp on this one... tried to keep it simple
Keep sketching cred.
looking good hipster and kwu,
you're characters are the shit hipster.
Peter-Id of made them same height, thicken the bars of a few of em and make a few of the Letters bigger to match the J. i think it would look pretty dope then.
mues- thats looking nice
photo booth never captures the colors right
don't really like where i went with this... only like the E and D
Looks awesome man ^ my only suggestions are less cuts in your letters, seems kinda over the top. Maybe you were going for a more tore up look because of the dog, idk. And also the dog's front legs seem a tad bit too pigeon toed, ya know?
i got the dog how i wantednot the words, was a bit too much for me too, but i wanted to see how it'd turn out.
@cred thanks for the crits man. I wss proud of both of those thought those were probably my best yet. I feel ya on the s I knew it soon as I did it
fuck ya. keep working on it
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dank that is dope i gotta try that
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good shit Dank
working on my lines, need new pens.
bricks arent layered like that... just sayin
cred, don't get stuck on connections. to be honest you aren't really there yet, doesn't mean you can try it but you shouldn't be doing them on every piece, nah mean?
also you should of leaned the top of the E to the left
i like that one more than your others though, because you didn't do unnecessary extension on the left leg of the R, looks a lot better. keep it up, man
fuck you rib.... i realize.
Dope dank, really like that dog haha. Reminds me of the dog from Tom and Jerry, except more brown.
And MN Nice that's nicer then usual, although I don't like the T covering the Y so much.
Flick for talkin, crits are always welcome.
Fucked up the M on the first one and the N on the second :/
Last edited by Shit Outta Luck; 03-05-2012 at 07:12 PM.
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Ever heard of a fucking mop?
mugen is nice, kinda decreases in size though
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