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    Peter, nice concept with the letters. If you cut your lines for sharper corners and go with something other then focal 3d you'd have somethinggoing and I'd loose the spikes you added on the purple aura

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    With that belt buckle you have no swag.
    PETER - The M is also too little. On the whole sketch its going a lil from big too little but maybe i dont see it right.

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    Couple new ones

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    @Neus Lookin better, make sure you keep your bars even on that S

    Too hungover to keep my lines crisp on this one... tried to keep it simple

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    Keep sketching cred.


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    looking good hipster and kwu,
    you're characters are the shit hipster.
    Peter-Id of made them same height, thicken the bars of a few of em and make a few of the Letters bigger to match the J. i think it would look pretty dope then.
    mues- thats looking nice

    photo booth never captures the colors right
    don't really like where i went with this... only like the E and D
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    Looks awesome man ^ my only suggestions are less cuts in your letters, seems kinda over the top. Maybe you were going for a more tore up look because of the dog, idk. And also the dog's front legs seem a tad bit too pigeon toed, ya know?

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    i got the dog how i wanted not the words, was a bit too much for me too, but i wanted to see how it'd turn out.
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    @cred thanks for the crits man. I wss proud of both of those thought those were probably my best yet. I feel ya on the s I knew it soon as I did it

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    Quote Originally Posted by dankbudz View Post
    looking good hipster and kwu,
    you're characters are the shit hipster.
    Peter-Id of made them same height, thicken the bars of a few of em and make a few of the Letters bigger to match the J. i think it would look pretty dope then.
    mues- thats looking nice

    photo booth never captures the colors right
    don't really like where i went with this... only like the E and D
    fuck ya. keep working on it
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    dank that is dope i gotta try that

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    good shit Dank

    working on my lines, need new pens.

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    bricks arent layered like that... just sayin
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    cred, don't get stuck on connections. to be honest you aren't really there yet, doesn't mean you can try it but you shouldn't be doing them on every piece, nah mean?
    also you should of leaned the top of the E to the left
    i like that one more than your others though, because you didn't do unnecessary extension on the left leg of the R, looks a lot better. keep it up, man

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    Dope dank, really like that dog haha. Reminds me of the dog from Tom and Jerry, except more brown.
    And MN Nice that's nicer then usual, although I don't like the T covering the Y so much.
    Flick for talkin, crits are always welcome.

    Fucked up the M on the first one and the N on the second :/
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    mugen is nice, kinda decreases in size though
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    I was trying to take suggestions from a pic a posted a couple days ago. tried a little more letter definition. I know my shading is messed in places. the second pic is an 'S' I want to incorporate into it..feel like it has more style.
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    .lets just get to the violence.

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    @Asis13 That stuffs pretty good bro, loving the shading, don't see so much of that ah.. Good stuff keep it up =)

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    Some feedback? Thanks in advance.. Says "Sketch" But kinda stuffed up the k... Trying to get into characters, so all crits welcome, just keep in mind, it my first character.
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