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    Nice style Venom!Maybe add some color to the 3d that might create some definition and make your letters pop.

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    i think the reason it failed is cause you tried too hard and didn't pay attention to basics. it lacks structure and the bars are inconsistent in size. also i don think those connections will help develop a good style right now. the fill is a cool idea but not ideal for a simp like this, should of left it all silver.

    i think you should retry this but lean it all to the left, and not wiggle the bars so much, reduce it about half as much and make the bars the fatness of the O and bottom of the M.

    its not your best, but its something to learn from definitely. hope this helped at all


    crit to urs down there \/ \/
    there is too much added to every letter. E is hidden and i really don't feel the NOM connection, i would make the O is own letter.

    your round robin entry was on point. go off that.
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    and this?


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    Quote Originally Posted by ven0m View Post
    need some proper crits on this:



    tried going a bit further creatice-wise with my letters than the usual straights and simps... turned out, according to the intermediate counsil, I failed.

    so hit me with some crits
    the V and the E are the best. The left leg of the N is way too squished, as is the middle of the M. And the N to O to M connection is fairly wack. But the coloring is pretty dope.

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    and this?

    this one is just overall wack. Not much else here i can crit.
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    the M killed me
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    feel like your moving a bit backwards phat you've done way better

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    crits yo!

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    That first venom looks sick structure and colorS are dope

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    crits please?

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    seks, you're just butt hurt... get over it bruda
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    ok ok ... mayb ur right...i am pissed... but ur gunna tell me that that venom is anything less than garbage? lmao...

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    he doesn't have a cocky attitude like you. he is willing to improve. now shut up, fool
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    yo were all here doin the same shit. chill

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    Hahahaha.
    Dank looks good, in that seldom I like it just make the OM lean like the seld
    Sek keep practicing...go back to simples
    Phat those 2 aren't that good, but agreed your tfrrt lemon was dope do more like that
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    My K is royally fucked on the top one. I fucked up the outline, was correct on the sketch =/

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    crits please?
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    diggin the bottom on

    simple
    smudged the O and gotta keep the color in the lines
    crits?

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    @ syn - 3d looks really clean

    @ toys.r - youre joking right? but that connection at the bottom is kinda jarring. not feeling the bottom right of the K

    first simple, can already see issues with bar size and letter inconsistency, but, more practice is a good thing. crits are always appreciated.

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    Can I plz get a few crits. what type of 3d should go.

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