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    Skewr - The bottom one is much nicer
    Dempo - Make it more simple, i think the 2 main bars on your A are good so stick with them and use less extentions etc

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    bump for crits

    toys-r-us: you're obviously on the internet. find out.

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    Toys - Do straight bars, don't flare them yet. It's pretty uneven and flares awkwardly.

    Mike - Try to keep your hand more steady when outlining. I advise doing more straight letters like Willis does.

    Will - Getting cleaner, the 3D has improved a lot, keep it up.

    Tempo - Looks like you going backwards, drop those connections. On the tag try to separate your P and O, looks like TEMB

    Peter - Liking this style, the L's leg bar seems to be a little smaller than the rest of the bars.

    I don't like my R on the Orange one, otherwise. Crits

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    Quote Originally Posted by SynOne View Post
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    this is solid. I suggest making the loop of your R a reverse of the top of your S (mirrored if you will)

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    blackbook work, let me know what you all think?

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    we are zombies, the ninja turtle karak in the second flick is maaaaaaaaaaad killer dude. props on that. for real
    but all your letters are bad. scrap em all and start over fresh according to the 'new to graffiti' thread

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    ninja turtles go hard.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ven0m View Post
    we are zombies, the ninja turtle karak in the second flick is maaaaaaaaaaad killer dude. props on that. for real
    but all your letters are bad. scrap em all and start over fresh according to the 'new to graffiti' thread
    you think the letters are just to dated? It would make sense, this is my first black book work in around 10 years.

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    well im sorry my friend but it looks like those of someone who started 10 minutes ago rather than years... if youve been around for this long you'd at least have a basic grasp of bars...
    no beef though. just take a breather and slow your pace down. climb that ladder a step at a time slowly or else you'll fall

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    ya for sure i didnt take it that way , I was actually agreeing with you. This last week is the first time I have attepted anything graff realated since my early 20's. I am looking for hrlp/ critics so I can get back into it.
    Thanks for the thread Im reading it all through now.

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    crits?

    zombies- i don't think the letters would look half bad if you took away all the add ons, extensions, etc. and left to to bars. the tek shows a bit of potential. just keep practicing, stick it to bars with some flavor for now.
    sez and dempo- scrap that
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    showin ur true colors

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    What the hell does that even say?
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    I tagged a bus seat yesterday.

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    Your sig. Really? ^ C'mon man.

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    yall like dick. we get it
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    That's my sister faggot

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    Lol I think its upside down?

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    i have no clue
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    I tagged a bus seat yesterday.

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    eFx - try going a lot simpler, just do keyboard letters for now

    did this today in class crits please
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