diggin the bottom on
simple
smudged the O and gotta keep the color in the lines
crits?
diggin the bottom on
simple
smudged the O and gotta keep the color in the lines
crits?
@ syn - 3d looks really clean
@ toys.r - youre joking right? but that connection at the bottom is kinda jarring. not feeling the bottom right of the K
first simple, can already see issues with bar size and letter inconsistency, but, more practice is a good thing. crits are always appreciated.
Can I plz get a few crits. what type of 3d should go.
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Skewr - The bottom one is much nicer
Dempo - Make it more simple, i think the 2 main bars on your A are good so stick with them and use less extentions etc
bump for crits
toys-r-us: you're obviously on the internet. find out.
Toys - Do straight bars, don't flare them yet. It's pretty uneven and flares awkwardly.
Mike - Try to keep your hand more steady when outlining. I advise doing more straight letters like Willis does.
Will - Getting cleaner, the 3D has improved a lot, keep it up.
Tempo - Looks like you going backwards, drop those connections. On the tag try to separate your P and O, looks like TEMB
Peter - Liking this style, the L's leg bar seems to be a little smaller than the rest of the bars.
I don't like my R on the Orange one, otherwise. Crits
this is solid. I suggest making the loop of your R a reverse of the top of your S (mirrored if you will)Originally Posted by SynOne
blackbook work, let me know what you all think?
^^ shits looken tough
we are zombies, the ninja turtle karak in the second flick is maaaaaaaaaaad killer dude. props on that. for real
but all your letters are bad. scrap em all and start over fresh according to the 'new to graffiti' thread
of course you write sane, we were expecting you
ninja turtles go hard.
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you think the letters are just to dated? It would make sense, this is my first black book work in around 10 years.
well im sorry my friend but it looks like those of someone who started 10 minutes ago rather than years... if youve been around for this long you'd at least have a basic grasp of bars...
no beef though. just take a breather and slow your pace down. climb that ladder a step at a time slowly or else you'll fall
of course you write sane, we were expecting you
ya for sure i didnt take it that way , I was actually agreeing with you. This last week is the first time I have attepted anything graff realated since my early 20's. I am looking for hrlp/ critics so I can get back into it.
Thanks for the thread Im reading it all through now.
crits?
zombies- i don't think the letters would look half bad if you took away all the add ons, extensions, etc. and left to to bars. the tek shows a bit of potential. just keep practicing, stick it to bars with some flavor for now.
sez and dempo- scrap that
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showin ur true colors
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just starting out
What the hell does that even say?
yes i am using a paint brush obviously
Your sig. Really? ^ C'mon man.
yall like dick. we get it
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