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    better

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    Keep the z, straighten up the W, straight bar across the A for now. And you did those scroll thingys nice, but not just yet bud.

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    This thread needs more me! haha just kidding, but crits would be cool on this. Already know the leg of the K is awkward as well as left leg of the n...
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    Yeah that left leg of the N I not liking, plus the K like you said, also the middle bit of the e is to fat.. Nice one though =)

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    Quote Originally Posted by MASTAH_RIBCAGE View Post
    mad burners, but whats with that silver dick above the last one?
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    ^^ give me your pens and 360 controller... now

    naked- keep em comin, just do another and fix what you thinks wrong.
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    Trying to work with my bars. Made this shit too condensed I know. any crits other than that?


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    Quote Originally Posted by SHEARZ. View Post
    Yeah that left leg of the N I not liking, plus the K like you said, also the middle bit of the e is to fat.. Nice one though =)

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    Not spamming, just bottom of page so no one really see's, bumped to this page for more crits hatred tips etc..
    y0.

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    ^Boooooo

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    @Shearz Kinda lacking in letter structure. Clean as hell though.

    Kinda got too wild with this one, need to simple it down.

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    Thanks man, I love your highlights on that one, there clean, most people go over the top, yours are nice =)
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    try thicker outlines^^
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    round robin


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    Man, I was gonna put up some shit. Then I realized how bad it would look compared to literally everything I've seen in this thread.
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    Screw it, I don't know you people.
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    just a simp, ignore the 3d on this one, i know its shit, any crits on the letters?

    simppp by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr

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    ^Not that bad Seen Worse
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    Any Crits on mine ?
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    @Gerb Try to keep your bars even on that one.
    @Seem Dont worry about comparing your stuff to others just use that as motivation to improve. Lose the extra stuff on that one and try to make a clean simple sketch first.
    @MN Nice Dope as hell, not sure about the capital I that's also a lower case i. it kinda works though.
    @Anil Not bad, The A came out nice, make the I a bit thicker and flatten the point on the L so it looks like the bottom left corner of the A.

    Was gonna scrap this but decided to try to clean it up a bit, oh well.


    also bump for crits on my last 2, I like the third one best, second one the bars came out looking skinnier than i want. Damn noodles flappin around.

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