is that a pissed off banana?
is that a pissed off banana?
Started Graffiti a few days ago. After tons of practice, I finally made a full throw-up.
that is not a throw up, that is a piece. and a shitty one at that. you need to go simpler man, i;m getting tired of say this on this site, but KEYBOARD LETTERS!!!!!!!!!
Jealousy, some say it's sickening
They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury
Originally Posted by Arose.One
throw up? Where? Dude thats not a throwie but for the crits slow down, read the new to graffiti thread at the toys forum here and take a lil more practice and then come back here.
And what are you spastic with that shaky lines.
Dice all i can say is draw keyboard letters to get better structure...
and btw these are throw ups
Haze/SE3, SaneSmith, Seen and SP1 are my shit. I love them so much.
"Game recognize game and you lookin' kinda unfamiliar right now." - Riley Freeman
Ever heard of a fucking mop?
bump for crits.
and jiska those characters are tight man.
I sever heads, just to sharpen my skills
Thanks for your opinions guys.Next time I'll be sure to keep it simple, and I'll get more practice.
@hicks nice :P
Heres a sketch for a bigger piece
im thinking about posting that one real soon
and crits please
or can i start posting on the intermediate thread?
dude if you want crits, rotate your photo
^ What he said. Rotate your potato.
Your K is a little off, doesn't look right imo. Your E goes in too much (that's probably just me though) and the bottom right of your U is a little thin. And those extensions are eh, at least your letters don't suck and you didn't try to put 301241 fucking arrows. Good job overall. Not intermediate worthy though.
And fuck both of you^ turn your heads.
"Game recognize game and you lookin' kinda unfamiliar right now." - Riley Freeman
Ever heard of a fucking mop?
go way simpler. you gotta walk before you can run bud, and crawl even before that. you are no where near being able to post in that thread. no offence. you're bars are consitent though, just even out those letters, and lose the added on shit and it'll get better.
Jealousy, some say it's sickening
They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury
Definitively better than mine.
the perspective on your can characters is bad, letters are lack-luster, extentions need work, and need to clean up your 3d a bit (some places it's visible in the "paint cloud" others not at all it wouldn't be entirely missing anywhere if the letter is visible).
I am taking everyone advice on how to get better what u guys think on this?
Axil - Looking better, but your A is HUGE compared to the rest. Try to keep them close to the same size.
My bar widths got fucked on this one. I still liked the outcome though.
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