I am taking everyone advice on how to get better what u guys think on this?
I am taking everyone advice on how to get better what u guys think on this?
Axil - Looking better, but your A is HUGE compared to the rest. Try to keep them close to the same size.
My bar widths got fucked on this one. I still liked the outcome though.
I Like it apart from the E for some reason it looks like a M flipped so try making it a straight line And what do you think off my stickers
keep working dude
Thanks
Tried to add a bit of color to my work, is it any better ?
Just keep trying on your bars and spacing. simple fills are fine but just don't get too hung on colors right now. Use a lined notebook to help with your lining.
What has happened to this thread. Goddamn.
Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.
Originally Posted by PETER
Already know this one sucks, but maybe you could get the idea i was going for, i only like the A really.
I realize this is the same piece as before, but i forgot i wanted to do the A and E in diferent colors so i redid it. you could crit it
Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.
@Naked finish that one up im kinda digging it.
Tried pushing the envelope a bit, gonna do much simpler for the next few.
Last edited by cred1384; 03-21-2012 at 07:25 PM.
Your letters are lacking Cred, never forget about your letters. But those colors are beautiful and it's clean, props to that. That C the top extension is wack the bend is eh, you shoulda straightened left leg of the R and the right leg of the R is ew. Top/middle of the E doesn't work in your favor and you should've probably straightened the left bar of the D, and fixed the top right and bottom middle parts of the D. But it's good you're trying new things. I still wait to see a really dope simple from you though.
"Game recognize game and you lookin' kinda unfamiliar right now." - Riley Freeman
Ever heard of a fucking mop?
Quick collab with the money maker!
Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.
For some reason I really like how yours goes over his. That's a fucking dope thing I'm gonna do that one day.
"Game recognize game and you lookin' kinda unfamiliar right now." - Riley Freeman
Ever heard of a fucking mop?
@Mild Dope as fuck.
Simpless
@Mild Every time you do something i think its good
@Cred TO SICK
tried to add a little bit more to my letters + i know my X is bad BTW I'm thinking of changing my name because Its kinda a hard name to do good stuff with my name for me X + I are hard to do anything creative to.
Haha nobody in here should take compliments from anyone short of tasty, dank, occasionally kwu, ribcage, or naked. Listen to them. And cred that's better but stop with you're pretty colors so much. Sketch/outline and repeat. Every once in a while throw in some color. But not every single time. Good colors though.
"Game recognize game and you lookin' kinda unfamiliar right now." - Riley Freeman
Ever heard of a fucking mop?
lol outta do you think i should change my name cus for me its hard to do creative stuff with it? AXIL
@Axil every letter will at some point frustrate the hell out of you, so changing your name wouldn't change much. Just practice practice practice repeat etc.
Thanks Cred You help me the most on here :P
@ cred im seein prgoression from u good job dude
@naked diggen that collab thumbs up
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