just sayin it aint straight
Cred- you are getting a lot better, really fast, that simp looks freshh, i remember when i was progressing quickly for a bit, havent been sketching enough lately, need to get back into that
Dank- looking nice as always, i like that o for some reason a lot, but the middle bars of the m look off because they are the only skinny bars in th whole thing
just some random shit i drew today, not really satisfied with any of it but still looking for crits if anyones got any
Picture 269 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr
Picture 270 by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr
some ol' shit hav not been writing often lately.
*SAVE 5 POINTZ*
F.Y.E. KRU (Fuk You Expekt)
Just started writing, been playing around with throwies. Any critique or tips is greatly appreciated.
Last edited by ZeektheSneek; 03-27-2012 at 12:31 AM.
I think your tag's pretty ill
Tried going more "italic"
@Wil The bottom bar of your L isn't proportional, and the outline is wack and making it look bad, overall not too shabby though, keep it up.
trying to improve my hand stylee, any crits on this one?
trying to get my bars and connections down better. any tips?
CRED - good but dont do that stuff with the connections, but seeing tru that its a good simp
RARK/KAKK - Decent but make your bars for now more concistent and on the second that bulb thing on the left leave that
Bump from last page. Crits still appreciated!
@bio 99 your lettering seems inconsistent in size. Try and even up each letter, and make the bars closer in size. Also, it's hard to tell if you're writing a B, an R or a K. Try and differentiate them so there is a clear difference.
Last edited by ZeektheSneek; 03-27-2012 at 10:38 PM.
Skatejunt. You've come a long way. those are looking pretty good. Keep bangin' the books.
@Rasn Lose the extensions on the second one and make sure your bar proportions are consistent.
@Dank I like how each sketch you do has just a bit more swag than the last. Always inspiring mah negro.
Reworked the last one with one simple and one trying new stuff
Last edited by cred1384; 03-27-2012 at 09:21 PM.
Dank, I like how your L and D extension fill in that negative space. But that K and M are maaaad ugly. Those bends are weak man.