yo cred I've been seeing yyou post your stuff a lot, and all i can say is just make sure that underline, hits your letters, and it'll improve it a lot
and lol risk, I'm not even christian and i think thats offensive, fuck hahaah.
yo cred I've been seeing yyou post your stuff a lot, and all i can say is just make sure that underline, hits your letters, and it'll improve it a lot
and lol risk, I'm not even christian and i think thats offensive, fuck hahaah.
Thanks for the tips
@Risk Not sure about the bubbles.
twoo (I did the tag before i read your post aiko. Next time i'll fix it)
Hey lemme know what you guys think. It's a bit off, when I paint it I will fix up the disproportions.
*SAVE 5 POINTZ*
F.Y.E. KRU (Fuk You Expekt)
A few more sketches, trying to stick with the basics and get clean letters. Crits?
Dempo: I'd outline that shit darker, your bleed through from the other side is distracting to say the least.
Emune: I like the style, definitely need to clean up proportions though. Your second E is tiny, and maybe even out bar sizes.
zeek, you suck at graffiti. quit now. its not the hobby for you.
and that purple one is the worst.
flickr.com/photos/smokeitup421
http://s883.photobucket.com/home/smokeitup421/index
Damn, calm the fucking beef. He is doing what he should be doing: "trying to stick with the basics and get clean letters." That being said, work on the first one and keep working with the second one. Tweek it, and it can be a pretty nice basic throwie. If you want to draw that cleaner, start off with the bottom wavey line, and draw out about four of those, try to get them all the same shape and length, then draw in your letters. IF that makes any sense... It's what I used to do when experimenting with those letters. Looks good though, keep it up and don't let fags like this^^ get you down.
Originally Posted by cred1384
Thanks for the tips
@Risk Not sure about the bubbles.
twoo (I did the tag before i read your post aiko. Next time i'll fix it)
Cred your shit has been growing on me lately. Keep it up man.
yeah. keep it up cred,
really feeling alot of your recent pieces.
-Omiz-
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@ CRED keep it up man, looking better everyday
@zeek you got good basic son. work on your handys and simples. fill a book man, these guys on here got it right with that. helps alotBAS xchange
Thanks for the motivation, always helpful and welcome.
@Mike dope. maybe make the white inline a tiny bit thicker? sick Hong Kong Phooey.
Might be headed in the wrong direction with this one but just felt like tryin it.
thats fuckin ill Emune.
++good stuff cred, i don't know if you want to be popping the bottom of the c and e like that though, bit awkward.
underlines good though.
@myke thats clean as hell
and Zeek i actually dig the first drawing, i think that could look really sweet up on a wall.
Lol you arent much better.
Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.
lmao
re-dun-did-it
make the C and E match more. even out the 3d and your straight
Nah cred i say dumb it down a bit. I think you jumped the gun and went for a lot of things to happen at once.
Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.
meh.
syrup in my cup maayne hold up.]
@Romero i like it, maybe try it with thicker bars too?
@Mild i hear ya but i figure why not try every once in awhile. I gave it one more go but i'ma tone it down next time.
@Mike and Mild thanks for the crits, much appreciation as alwayss.
the more i look at this damn E the weirder it looks to me...
favorite piece by you so far.
the d looks kinda plain with the rest though.
i actually like the e
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