Blackbooks

[cred1384]

@Romero i like it, maybe try it with thicker bars too?

@Mild i hear ya but i figure why not try every once in awhile. I gave it one more go but i'ma tone it down next time.
@Mike and Mild thanks for the crits, much appreciation as alwayss.

the more i look at this damn E the weirder it looks to me...

[omiz]

favorite piece by you so far.
the d looks kinda plain with the rest though.
i actually like the e

[sadgeh]

For the round robin not amused about it because i gotta rush it

[aiko]

Romero i have an M in my name and can never work with it help a nukka out

[REAL_LYFE_MIKE]

@Romero i like it, maybe try it with thicker bars too?

@Mild i hear ya but i figure why not try every once in awhile. I gave it one more go but i'ma tone it down next time.
@Mike and Mild thanks for the crits, much appreciation as alwayss.

the more i look at this damn E the weirder it looks to me...

try one with taller letters but same style. i would define the letters more. just a thought

[REAL_LYFE_MIKE]

For the round robin not amused about it because i gotta rush it

for a rush it still aint bad. I ve seen alot worse on well time taken.

[aiko]

Sadgeh I love the colours, and im a sucker for anything with crosshairs but im really not digging the E otherwise its good.

[REAL_LYFE_MIKE]

@ CRED keep it up man, looking better everyday
@zeek you got good basic son. work on your handys and simples. fill a book man, these guys on here got it right with that. helps alotAttachment 61112 BAS xchange

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[Shit Outta Luck]

Nah cred i say dumb it down a bit. I think you jumped the gun and went for a lot of things to happen at once.

I concur. I do that shit a lot with pen freestyles. It's good to do every once in a while, because even if you do it shitty, you get an idea in your head for a letter or letters. In 5 years that shit could come back and inspire you to do something dope as hell. I mean personally Cred, I never ever would've thought to bend/kink a C like that, it's just not how I think.

But more simple my friend, you'll progress in time.

Lyfer we always get on at the same time... but the top of your A is wack, to pointy looks weird and shit. B feels a little to short, and the S is good but it resembles a 5 too much imo. That character is SO nice though...what was his name again :/

[ZeektheSneek]

zeek, you suck at graffiti. quit now. its not the hobby for you.

and that purple one is the worst.

Oi, sorry if I've offended you somehow looking for critiques. That was very constructive. Thank you DKODE, keep working that dirty throwie you got goin' on your flickr.

Cheers to everyone who had crits, I'll keep working on it. I'll post some handstyles later this week

[RaWs3kz]

crits?

[REAL_LYFE_MIKE]

much better than the last. i see you took my advice bout the points. now try and et your letter thickness the same all the way through. nice improvement tho JAE

[RaWs3kz]

thanks ^ ..and yeh i did take ur advice on the points- looks much better being uniform... and yeh -the A looks thinner then both the other lettrs...

[Mildstyles]

Simple.
What some kids in this thread should be doing

[Shit Outta Luck]

More like everyone in this thread including myself!

[dankbudz]

is that old?

quicki for that chinese word battle thingamajigger... needs 3d and highlights tho

[SkateJunt]

lil thing, il post my slaps here too, delete the pic if you want mods...

yeah man... by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr

re up on slapsss by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr

[Mildstyles]

No its not i just havent really been sketching lately, So my junk is lacking.
And that chinese thing looks cool, i think? Idk what its supposed to look like lol

[Shit Outta Luck]

I feel that naked. I needa sketch more in general too.

I put the date on this because I mailed it to an address in Cuba. Without a stamp. I wanna see when it comes back motherfuckers.

[dankbudz]

like a month or so... they won't send it to cuba if thats what you're hoping for...