kwu- thats looking ill, not really feeling the lower case T but its dope none the less
Aeso- cool that down a bit... pracice your letters not your arrows
willis- keep doin them simps
dane- connect the bars and cut the swirly shit.
humr- doppe shit
cred- the middle bar of the E should be going slightly downward or at least be straight. don't get caught up on them fills jus yet
not finishing this cause i hate it.
Originally Posted by Mildstyles
Cred - Sick fill , Loving your letters and when are you going to start doing stuff on walls i say you will be really good
Real - i dont know why i just love that e
Dotch - Bit bad but work on your t on the last one i say
yo dank, dont know if you saw this yet, but its a lil something i did up for your delayed exchange. still working on the piece itself.
EDIT:
and clean out your inbox, so rather than reposting the shit out of this picture, i coulda just sent it haha
Jealousy, some say it's sickening
They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury
oh word, good looking! looks nice. and yeah gotta delete the inbox aha
Tasty Love The colors
Last edited by Axil; 04-06-2012 at 02:35 AM.
Bump for crits?? Is this just wack and I should stop trying for a while??
-just your average neighborhood Spiderman
Cred - Sick fill , Loving your letters and when are you going to start doing stuff on walls i say you will be really good
Real - i dont know why i just love that e
Dotch - Bit bad but work on your t on the last one i sayfirst off, shut up no one caresTasty Love The colors
Btw does any know if anyone write Row im thinking off changing my name to it because i have came up with a tag that looks nice with it
secondly, those dotch's are no where remotely as bad as yours so... like i said before shut up
quick one, gonna start a nicer one some time this weekend jus been busy.
There no need to be like that i was only asking because i did not want to start working with it and find out some one all ready writes it.
like i said no one cares..do your own homework and post sketches instead of your gay comments
i Like the First and the third one not sure about the one in the middle.
lmao.
dope shit KWU, nice handz on the first sheet
crits + advise on these would be awesome
exchanges.
Sarp: Read the "New to Graffiti" thread daily. That is if you're serious....
Lookin' good SEN.
Lmao@kwu
That slotr is clean SENO
@Axil what theyre saying is get your stuff where your not in need of crits, then you would be open to give others some. Till then your gonna catch hell.
Indeed. And read the comment I wrote you a few pages back, that should send you off in the right direction.
And Seno, that Slotr sketch is pretty awesome. I really like the colours.
Just wanted to bump this to get some more crits/opinions.
Axil said it's "a bit bad", but apparently he isn't a real solid source.
And KWU said, in reply to Axil's comment, "it's not as remotely bad as yours", so I was wondering if it still qualifies mine as bad?
I know it's nothing special and I don't have style or anything yet, but still. Thanks.
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