word alright thanks dudes
any time. get to wrorking and lets see what happens.
SKIZ - try to get all your letters to match your Z
and you prolly dont need that bottom bar on it
less is more
i know these arent good at all but thought id put them up to see if im on the right track (which im probably not)... i read the "new to graff" page but i dont know how to make bars or whatever for my S and Z.. i like the flow i got goin in the top part but im tryin to find a way to transfer it to the K and I... any crits right now, or should i keep practicing? lol
i like the s z in this one but i dont think the k and i would work in there
the z is weird in this one i know. lol
^yeah, I write szar, and the z is always the hardest letter to style. I'm not sure why :/ just keep it up and sketch like no ones business and then it should slowly begin to progress.
-just your average neighborhood Spiderman
skiz: you have an advantage of sorts here. you can have symentry by just flipping your S around for a Z or vice versa. if you want a natrual looking S try drawing two circles and make the s around them keepin it the same width all the way through.
yeah thanks i noticed that symmetry and im likin it. haha.. i think my problem is with the k and i.. im tryin to get them to match the s and z's flow to make it look put together nicely.
Try capitals and keep them upright for now.
here is a sorta simp with an octopie on it
^^no drop the character bs and focus on your letters first.
I fuckin suck at piecing ppl name a few established writers who do nice simps, so I can pick up some different ideas,schemes (bite) lol
Last edited by H1P30N3R; 04-09-2012 at 07:34 PM.
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Hey guys , this is my first "piece" of 2012 and would just like some critique. I would critique others, but im not sure I'm good enough to be giving advice. I'm like, legit sorry if this picture turns out massive.
Oh and I loooove simple stuff
- Thanks for any feedback, good or bad.
i dont feel like the Z fits good in this one but how do the other letters look?
thats not bad make all letters level
the z doesnt fit because the s is round and the z is stright . im sure that theres a way to make it work like that . but as people said befor . u have the advantage because u can flip around the s .
the s is pretty solid . 1 small thing i noticed was that were the middle bar of the s connects to the top round part its sharper than it is on the bottom bend of the s .
ur on the right track . keep crushin pages like this .
word dude thanks. and yeah im workin on ways to flip that S and make a Z out of it but everytime it looks too much like a 2 to me.. idk ill try it and put one up i guess and see what you guys think.
I hate having my post as one of the last ones on a page
@SKIZ: I'm not pro or anything but maybe you should work on getting the letters even, cos right now some of them are just floating above others. Again im no pro so feel free to disregard
yeah i have a weird habit of doing that that i got to get rid of. lol