yeah i have a weird habit of doing that that i got to get rid of. lol
yeah i have a weird habit of doing that that i got to get rid of. lol
Well then draw parallel lines and that reminds you to keep the letters a certain size and a somewhat straight line. It's what I done with mine, which I shall now bump as im not sure anyone will see it as its on the last page.
Originally Posted by Saltire
Hey guys , this is my first "piece" of 2012 and would just like some critique. I would critique others, but im not sure I'm good enough to be giving advice. I'm like, legit sorry if this picture turns out massive.
Oh and I loooove simple stuff
- Thanks for any feedback, good or bad.
^more advanced than me so I cant really crit what im unsure of .... besides the middle of the u looking sketchy
crits please
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do em bigger hip3oner! or do 3 a page. bigger = better though. and yours is much better that that fools.
and crits:
bars gradually got bigger, pay attention to that shiiit. and the base line isn't that solid. personally i wouldn't have all those extra lines through the letters. oh and there is mad negative space between the P and R, thats bound to happen though when you are doing straights,yeah, just pay attention to shit like that. I like the idea of the tops of the P and R. just work on it, do what you does
what you had posted before was better overall in my opinion. fux with whatever though to experiment, just don't get stuck on things.
skiz- make the bottom bar of the K go like \
@KOPR i like where you're headed.
@Saltire ... if you really loved simples you'd go even simpler. way simpler.
Dankbuds likes 'em big.
twoo that are kinda the same kinda different. gonna add the 3d later. @Atma I didn't ignore your crits my man i just inked two sketches i'd done.
Lost interest in graff for quite a while and starting to get back into it, first sketch I actually put any effort into, the more I look at it the more I hate it though.
Magoo52 - Like T isnt too bad but work on the bars on A and F
Resq - I think the Q would look better if the bars were all attached instead of the line just being stuck on there.
Skiz - Make your letters in more of a line and maybe extent top bar on K a little bit.
Saltire - More simple with less of the bumps etc, space out the U a bit more.
Kopr - Lose the extra bars at bottom of letters.
Can I get crits on this one?
CRITZ PLEASE Testing out new whiteout pen
Simps and 3d etc look ok to me, keep working on it, bubbles would be better with highlights all in same place on each one.
@willis1989 ill let someone else tell you how to change the style or whatever but id say move your letters closer together the L and E are like seperated from the W and D
Okay I'll go simpler guys, and the "U" is a "V" but thanks for the feedback anyway.
@Cred, I really like that second one man. I like the colours and I like how the R flows into the E.
@Spectral I like the 3D but your letters are all outta porportion. Like the A's fat then the S and K are anorexic if you get me.
@Willis1989, same as Skiz, you gotta get rid of the big spaces between the letters
Last edited by Saltire; 04-10-2012 at 11:21 AM.
^this. Also the outline on the E is thiner than the rest. the W looks wavy (may be th paper) while the rest is primarily straight. Decent. keep workin
CRED - you should try out some bars
spectral - i like that style. the 3d makes it pop
lewd - that skyline is cool. i straight letter would have looked nice tho
ROW - your improving
HIPE - i like your o man
skiz - your getting clean
i fucked it up with the purple, but crits would be interesting.. if you're wondering the i is the arabic A or alef...........
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this relik is pretty crazy
check out FTC pittsburgh
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that one you made for humor looks dirty with the white highlight thing
thanks for crits dank I will start going bigger... Im trying to avoid filling in my letters with color so you all can get a better look at my shit ...crits on this please. Seems alot of you cats are skipping steps you have to start out simple as hell you cant just dive into style. Im no pro but i've have learned that just from doing throwies it all develops very slow with minor tweaks.
lyfe -nice simps really dig your style
Last edited by H1P30N3R; 04-10-2012 at 04:08 PM.
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@Kopr watch that baseline, it's a little off. The top left of the P looks wack. Also make sure the pieces coming off the bottom of your letters are the same size, the one on the P is bigger. Getting better every time, good work.
@Mike I'm almost fully colorblind and i still love your color schemes. Good shit always coming from you.
@Physh maybe try to keep your bar ends consistent, (lose the arrows) and use the tops like on the top left of the K.
Tried something more complex, probably going back to what i was sketching before this. Trying to quit smoking lung cookies right now and can't seem to relax enough to make my lines clean what-so-ever.
Cred my man your stuff is coming along well......as well.
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