do em bigger hip3oner! or do 3 a page. bigger = better though. and yours is much better that that fools.
bars gradually got bigger, pay attention to that shiiit. and the base line isn't that solid. personally i wouldn't have all those extra lines through the letters. oh and there is mad negative space between the P and R, thats bound to happen though when you are doing straights,yeah, just pay attention to shit like that. I like the idea of the tops of the P and R. just work on it, do what you does
what you had posted before was better overall in my opinion. fux with whatever though to experiment, just don't get stuck on things.
skiz- make the bottom bar of the K go like \