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    @willis1989 ill let someone else tell you how to change the style or whatever but id say move your letters closer together the L and E are like seperated from the W and D

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    Okay I'll go simpler guys, and the "U" is a "V" but thanks for the feedback anyway.

    @Cred, I really like that second one man. I like the colours and I like how the R flows into the E.

    @Spectral I like the 3D but your letters are all outta porportion. Like the A's fat then the S and K are anorexic if you get me.

    @Willis1989, same as Skiz, you gotta get rid of the big spaces between the letters
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    Quote Originally Posted by akaSKIZ View Post
    @willis1989 ill let someone else tell you how to change the style or whatever but id say move your letters closer together the L and E are like seperated from the W and D
    ^this. Also the outline on the E is thiner than the rest. the W looks wavy (may be th paper) while the rest is primarily straight. Decent. keep workin

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    CRED - you should try out some bars
    spectral - i like that style. the 3d makes it pop
    lewd - that skyline is cool. i straight letter would have looked nice tho
    ROW - your improving
    HIPE - i like your o man
    skiz - your getting clean

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    i fucked it up with the purple, but crits would be interesting.. if you're wondering the i is the arabic A or alef...........
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    this relik is pretty crazy
    check out FTC pittsburgh

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    that one you made for humor looks dirty with the white highlight thing

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    thanks for crits dank I will start going bigger... Im trying to avoid filling in my letters with color so you all can get a better look at my shit ...crits on this please. Seems alot of you cats are skipping steps you have to start out simple as hell you cant just dive into style. Im no pro but i've have learned that just from doing throwies it all develops very slow with minor tweaks.

    lyfe -nice simps really dig your style


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    @Kopr watch that baseline, it's a little off. The top left of the P looks wack. Also make sure the pieces coming off the bottom of your letters are the same size, the one on the P is bigger. Getting better every time, good work.
    @Mike I'm almost fully colorblind and i still love your color schemes. Good shit always coming from you.
    @Physh maybe try to keep your bar ends consistent, (lose the arrows) and use the tops like on the top left of the K.

    Tried something more complex, probably going back to what i was sketching before this. Trying to quit smoking lung cookies right now and can't seem to relax enough to make my lines clean what-so-ever.





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    Cred my man your stuff is coming along well......as well.

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    @ Cred, top ones good apart from the E. From looking back a few pages you've progressed a lot, props.

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    cred thanks man its like my 5th or 6th time trying a simp so Im satisfied thus far... that top one is solid put that on a wall asap
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    KOPR thx man just seen you said that. keep your stuff going man.

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    quick one i just did.. i took a little of advice that each of you gave me and this is what i got... the Z is not meant to look good in this one.. i was just messing with the symmetry to show what it would look like.. idk how to get it to look good and have nice symmetry with the S yet. still workin on that.. but hows the rest look? thanks
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    Its simple but i dont know i like the Z always because of the sharp edges and on this it is a soft pussy Z for me. But hey its your decision

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    yea looks like ski2

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    yeah thats what i was sayin. lol. maybe i should make the S look more like the z??
    kinda like this one
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    Quote Originally Posted by Mildstyles View Post
    resQ me
    crit this shit if you want
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    I could feel this alot but I would have to say the Q would better with the inside bar filling the inside more.
    even almost begin it similar to wear the bottom E bar is.

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    Naked that Resq thing was dope.

    WAIT...is it supposed to mean ResCUE?
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    Coleo are you using paint and brush, or is that a pen?
    Ever heard of a fucking mop?


 

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