My advice to everyone is eliminate deadspace usre your bars make your letters symetrical and make sure every letter has flow standing by itself or in your name
P.s. My buds better then yours....
@ sin . nice pages.
and tasty lookin nug there
thanks for xchange dank.
sin dude that bud look like a hairy tarantella with its legs ripped off! feelin that page with all ur buddy taggs . good shit
dank I miss those sweet keyboard letters you used to buss out like nobody I kno
emace just keep at it dude and you will get closer to where u wana b. try to keep your holes in the letters the same.
Last edited by DEMPO; 04-12-2012 at 02:14 PM.
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F.Y.E. KRU (Fuk You Expekt)
CRED: all your shit is dope, work on some of your structure with your wilder shit. stay up homie.
sinn: you should be in the intermediate thread bro
I appreciate it Kinger.
@Centry i love that whole page.
@Dank that top one is freshhh.
trying to clean it up and bring it all together. Letters arent cut out, just tried giving them a bit of a shadow.
^^ thats shit is on fire kasm
cred that connection from r to e is proper. But the sharp kick out on the d idk about that kind of throws off the form of the d... just my opinion keep in mind your more advanced than me.
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I agree with humor here cred. My personal opinion (which is like an asshole, we all got'em) is it would vibe better if you flipped your c for the curve of the d.
I think you cover the e in all your pieces too much. To cred
@SOL icyy fill i like.
@Jae i like the character, very clean.
Thanks for the crits fellers. Gonna try flipping the D next time, did the opposite on this one to try to improve the structure.