Indeed! Try pinching the top of the C and D in... if that makes sense. I just wanna see how it looks. that color combo looks great.
Indeed! Try pinching the top of the C and D in... if that makes sense. I just wanna see how it looks. that color combo looks great.
Cred i like the purple one better. Those bars off the ends of the letters ruin it for me idk.
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not happy with the w but trying new things..
yeah i feel ya on that Norf. I like where you're going with that one. maybe on the W where the O leads into the middle bars make it connect to the left bar of the W (if you get what i mean). The extensions look nice though.
Quick sketch from class today.
Last edited by cred1384; 04-16-2012 at 02:06 PM.
Fuck Cred i remember when you was doing simple and now you doing this crazy shit :P
Please watch my video <3
hey cred, fix the middle part of your E. it kind of throws off the flow. You could also just shorten the line going across the middle for bar consistency.
Gowj, if you got rid of the crazy color scheme, did that clean with a nice drop shadow, you'd be steezin yo
Originally Posted by PREA672
@Cred: Nothing's taken the wrong way. I appreciate the comments. And indeed, I think I went overboard with the amount of different colours. The scheme doesn't completely work. Also, the smoke shouldn't have been grey because it's hardly noticeable against the background, and therefore feels a little off. However, I still had no idea that I was going to do this for the background at that point.
And as already has been said quite a few times before: your progression is fantastic and your dedication admirable. Great work.
Cred - the production process you had gone through dose not seem to be similar to what other guys try to do.
mind explaining to us how you've been able to develope these ideas for a way to do this?
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He listened to what motherfuckers said and put in work. He had a passion and he put some soul into this shit. And that's something we can all learn from.
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@Dempo Basically what SOL said haha. I also would just do my best to understand what it is that makes a sketch look good, using terms like structure and flow is nice and all but you have to understand what those really are and how they can be applied to your letters. When i finish a sketch i take a good 15 minute cig break and during that i try to pick out every mistake i can see in it, then i go back and re-sketch the whole thing correcting those mistakes, then repeat, and eventually shit just get's to the point where you barely make any dumb mistakes and can actually start tweaking stuff to add some steez. Also take every single crit into consideration, even if you feel it's wrong it can't hurt to try. Hope that helps?
For those who don't feel like reading the paragraph...
A combination of good weed and my aderall prescription hah.
Now that is what I should do. Thank you. Gonna do that as soon as I finish my bacon burger.
Also fuck adderall, I've been meditating to try and improve my focus.
Any ideas on the R for the 3rd one? Cuz I fucked it up in the second.
Last edited by Shit Outta Luck; 04-16-2012 at 06:19 PM.
"Game recognize game and you lookin' kinda unfamiliar right now." - Riley Freeman
Ever heard of a fucking mop?
@Sol Fuck i want a bacon burger. For the R on the third one, Use the same R as in the second but for the right leg try the same bar bend as you got on the bottom right of the Q. Might be worth a try
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cred, i love your C and E, so i suggest doing a bunch of lone R's and D's to progress. props on your progression though, i'm impressed
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Last edited by ven0m; 04-17-2012 at 08:06 AM.
@Freddy Why's it taken from that strange angle? makes it hard to see what's goin on
@Tasty Thanks for the props, nothing helps motivation more than those.
i'm in love with the R on this one
Last edited by cred1384; 04-17-2012 at 02:43 PM.
about that...
Last edited by MASTAH_RIBCAGE; 04-17-2012 at 02:36 PM.
row.... please dont make videos yet... the way u fill in ur letters makes no sense to me, just go left to right and try not to lift the marker off as much as possible... also the color balance really doesnt work, u cant use dark blue and outline with black, with sharpies u need a light color as a fill and a dark color as the outline... showing how u used pencils to sketch that out and rulers and erasers to do that just makes ya look more toy
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