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    SOAP - and the S and O, think about bar concistancy and your A you try too give it style but the other letters not thats weird so dont do that

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    sounds good thanks for the crits I'll deff take them into consideration and work on that

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    @Physh You should make the middle piece in the O the knife and have the jester stabbing it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by "PHYSH" View Post
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    a small dedication to SLOTR.. crits would really be appreciated....
    the R is overlapped to much other then that its pretty fresh man

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    yeah i fucked up big time with the R, the stabbing the was the first thought i had but i don't know why i didn't go with it... but how's the blood, dies it work??
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    ya i like it maybe next time try crazy colors and then have like skin peeling back with blood oozing out seen a few artists try ish ike that

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    yo hipeoner
    been lazy lately so it isn't clean, hope the letters are good though
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    Quote Originally Posted by cred1384 View Post


    I'm really diggin' this right now.
    PM me if you're looking to trade or cop sum stickers.


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    fact:my mom's not a whore..she just wanted me to look like 6 of her closest friends..

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    Crits, tried to go over it in pen but the shit wouldn't write so I ended up making my lines look worse than they really did. Well...Crit me up.

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    Quote Originally Posted by 9ToTheOH View Post
    Crits, tried to go over it in pen but the shit wouldn't write so I ended up making my lines look worse than they really did. Well...Crit me up.

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    Those curlicues and nonsense is a little out of style with the simple.... Also try beefing up that I and even out the size of bars overall.

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    Wish I had made the E's a bit more even in size, any crits though?

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    Soap - the way the right bar on A goes out makes too much space between letters
    Cred 134 - like the piece and 3d
    Zeek - no need for the extra bars and shit just make more simps
    Freddy - Thats phat as hell

    I think i kinda fucked my W a bit on this one


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    Zeek - Just realised you had a quote from someone else in your post so nvm that extra bar stuff I said lol

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    Like the piece, not really feeling the extra bars on the first S tho, dont know a lot about adding extra bars tho so feel free to ignore me lol

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    Nother for Mues. Not sure about this one, lost a a lot of the letter form when i filled it


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    You did. The e is almost completely lost. Has potential and that color scheme is one of my favorites. You do a great job of giving your pieces depth with shadows and such. That alone can make simple letters look amazing.
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    *WOOT* Senior Member *WOOT*


    Here are some stickers, trying to get more writers to from my area to come on this website

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    holy fuck please go die somewhere dark lonely and cold.

    anyway...
    cred- no me gusta your connections, extensions and those million little curves in every letter anddd your letter structure itself.
    with that said, you can at least color and use a pencil well, which is a plus cause then you can cover up everything stated above
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