I like the characters and the spraycan, keep working those simps and dont worry about it looking to simple, the more simple the better then after a while bend your letters a little or make them italic, but your going the right way about it.
I like the characters and the spraycan, keep working those simps and dont worry about it looking to simple, the more simple the better then after a while bend your letters a little or make them italic, but your going the right way about it.
I fixed the R is it any better now
I agree with peter, dont worry about colours too much just now, if you do a piece that you really like then maybe add colour but work on letters mostly, you can do 2 or 3 black and white pieces in the time it takes to do 1 colored
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Making a video anyone mind if i put some off your work in it ?
It is an improvement.
crits?
s33on3 - nice but i say remove the bar and the star on the last "u" on the first one
Sick Song with some pics off here
Last edited by Axil; 04-25-2012 at 11:52 AM.
Why would you want a 2 lettter nameget some more letters
Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.
Originally Posted by PETER
I wanna have sex
holy fuck yoiu little shit, you're making me stop posting here. you are not my friend and you will not put my shit on your fucking youtube video. jesus christ.
^LOL RAGE^
Could I get some critz on this? There are mistakes I can see, but suggestions/comments on the flow would be nice. I know I ran off the page...
shut up, your a gay lil cunt also
Yeah bro, you gotta ask EACH person before you put their fliks in your video. Otherwise you piss them off. And I agree with dank. Piss off. We are not your "Firends".s33on3 - nice but i say remove the bar and the star on the last "u" on the first one
Sick Song with some pics off here
Last edited by R3bel1995; 04-25-2012 at 03:56 PM.
-just your average neighborhood Spiderman
Black and whitess
too much.. gotta take a step back
your C looks like an L then a U molded into an R, you have way too many connections and extensions and lines going through your shit, it was started to look nice a few posts back, if refined, but you keep trying to improve, which aint bad but its looking like you are loosing your footing
Last edited by dankbudz; 04-25-2012 at 04:08 PM.
And your C to R connection is a bit off.
-just your average neighborhood Spiderman
I feel ya man thanks for the good crit.
May I say, that was quite original indeed. I really liked the part when you said "shut up," it left me with chills. I'll take your request into consideration and come back to you when I give a fuck. Stop whining, he broke some ethical rules, but guess what this is the FUCKING INTERNET. In case you didn't realize, everything you post can be copied, tracked and even sold unless you have a shit load of money, a copyright and a good lawyer. If you can't get over that fact, you shouldn't be on any forums, or writing graffiti for that matter.
yo give axil a break! we're all friends here.
isn't it enough that his piano's off tune at places?
it's cool with me man, post all the flicks you want online. as long as they're good and they're on my fb page already haha
of course you write sane, we were expecting you
Cred: Personally I think it's working. Only thing I'm not liking is the C and C/R connection. Maybe just move the top right of the C up a little. I'm diggin it. The D is dope. Maybe cut the extention of the back of the D and do something with the bottom of the E like the right side of the D.
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