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    Quote Originally Posted by cred1384 View Post
    @Peter thanks man, I'll try that

    Fixed up the last one.
    Looking a lot better man. Have you experimented with dropping the E down, and removing the back extension on the D? If you could make the bottom of the e, or the lower leg symmetrical and balanced with the R it would look more amazing. Just a suggestion, it looks really good as is. Loving the flow, the back of the D/what the E sits on is the only thing that pops out as odd to me.

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    im glad you've formulated my plan to scare little kids on the internet. maybe you can go do it on other forums and think you are cool

    also, don't double post and quote a photo in the same page, it makes YOU look unintelligent , and don't give crits cause you suck nuts.
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    I better have been in that video
    Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.

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    Haha Naked...and fuck you nine I didn't have any other paper.
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    Coleo are you using paint and brush, or is that a pen?
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    Thanks for the crits guys. Should I just try to go more simple? I also tried to make my letters look more different from each other, whadya think?

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    What do you guys think about these? Criticize my shit hard, it helps

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    3rd has most potential, fatten the K bars and make em str8 not kinked

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    IMG_0247 by centrysams, on Flickr
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    sol - not sure bout that s man the o an e are solid
    bio - try doing straights for a while before you start using bends and leans in your letters
    crits please

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    not bad. top right part of the k would look better without kink. then because u changed the k make the bottom right leg of r the same . also the o seems to not fit the style of the other letters . and the 3d is off on the o a lil bit . would be nice if there was a way to fill neg space between the p and r . just thoughts
    but with a lil practice . all those things will fix its self. keep fillin pages,
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    i was always told that simps beat weak pieces.
    and in my opinon. if u cant do the conncections right. then u should just do a simp
    Nіgga please
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    That's my sister faggot

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    word I gotta just practice alot get basic down before I start with mor bends tweaks and blending letters ... thanks man would give you crits but thats out of my league.
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    yall in the same league, on the same team, on the same mini field
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    fuck off . my shit stomps urs all day . u havent improved in a year . lol
    ***** plzz.... stop talkin like ur black . u retarted fat white kid

    atleast i try to do conections right , ahhahahh im surprized u ant been stabed in the neck yet .. i guess u dont paint much ahaha
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    I love this place lol rib your awesome at bein an asshole ... thing is I know im no good and ego naww it does nothing to have 1 online for myself.
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    and if u wanna talk shit we will take it to beef battle thread .. were all ur friends will vote for ur wackness ... lol
    u need a week to come up with a shitty attempt at a burner ahhaha
    i could fill the whole book in that amount of time
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    hipe- the top right bar on the K is a no go, and the O is pretty wobbly and looks like and egg, id just make it more round. also watch out on the 3d, should go out the same length at every point. and keep doing them simps,
    just work on a nice clean line for your outlines n shit. fuck around with slightly bending the bars once you get more confident with the letters, whenever ya think so. hope this helps loll

    centry- the 3d is off in a lot of places, and the lines inside it, watch out for that. and try more bars which form the letter rather then bars which form arrows, nah mean?
    im digging the background, beam type thing. reminds me of dragon ball Z, but you changed the perspective from bottom then at top, in the wrong way. shoulda kept it like the bottom.
    and please work on your hand, a simple tag is better than one with tons of lil extension type things, just write in clean ass script.

    also lose the ego, you only really have it with rib, buuut idunno if it really affects on how you look at your work. but being modest never hurt anyone.


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    on the H and E you have those lil down and up "cuts" ya know?
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    there are no extentions on that hand
    but i no that my handies are weak and i am workin on them
    but thanks for the crits

    im not losin no ego when it comes to rib .. he always talks shit about my stuff . and is an overall ass to everyone .
    soo he can take it ... cuz he deff dishes it .

    plus his work isnt good enough to talk shit about anyones stuff ,
    an im pretty nice to everone on every fourm
    i crit everyone i think i might be able to help . and never tell anyone there shitty or anythin like that .

    soo thats it
    if he waants to shut me up he can beat me in a battle other than that he can suck my fat dick
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    Quote Originally Posted by centrysam View Post
    fuck off . my shit stomps urs all day . u havent improved in a year . lol
    ***** plzz.... stop talkin like ur black . u retarted fat white kid

    atleast i try to do conections right , ahhahahh im surprized u ant been stabed in the neck yet .. i guess u dont paint much ahaha
    Lol centrysam got mad burners!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! Nіgga please. I am a fat retarded white kid, youre correct. How to paint? what is to paint? will you paint and teach me? Lol because I dont rush home to post my pics on bombingscience like you, I must have never picked up a can in my life.

    You try so hard to do connections correctly, but fail miserably, and somehow think your shit is tight
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    and if u wanna talk shit we will take it to beef battle thread .. were all ur friends will vote for ur wackness ... lol
    u need a week to come up with a shitty attempt at a burner ahhaha
    i could fill the whole book in that amount of time
    Lol
    @hipe you have a grasp of whats up.
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    i fail go back an look at ir battle piece bro .. holy fuck ... worst attepmt at connections ever .... that I omfg that I looks like it got curb stompd ahahhahah
    and that D the conncetion on that D is horrible ..... but enough talkin .... do the battle if ur better than me man. prove ur shit is better,

    or shut up an go trace some more pinnochios ahahhahaah faggot .
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