yup, its just practice practice practice, different words help too. and no problem on the crits, you aren't gay like 90% of the people on here and you offer good crits on my throws, so you deserve some real crits that aren't from fags like axil and uknowigetup
Originally Posted by Mildstyles
sloppy and still needs work, should probably go more simple but anyways crits appreciated.
this post made my fucking night.
How long do most writers wait before they start painting walls/trains?
Did these two last night, trying to do characters more I know they suck but can I get crits on letters? Thanks
Go cry to an admin about it <3.
willis I would say as long as your comfortable on paper start with a chill wall then work toward freights... but then again it is never to early to get a little can control under your belt. Even if your letters are off executing them with paint and gaining can experience always helps in the end.
Last edited by H1P30N3R; 04-26-2012 at 02:18 PM.
Only Fuck Fat Bitches Crew !!
Get them closer to each other now
hipe the right side of your K is out of proportion. I suggest keeping the legs on the K and R straight for now.
thanks for crits looking any better? I now see the k has a bigger tilt on it.
Only Fuck Fat Bitches Crew !!
quickie, crits yo.
looks good mildstyles having an identity crisis?
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willis-maybe lose the extension on ur L in the 1st and 3rd picture. i like your E and D in your second picture but just keep practicing. practice your smurf character, its weak right now but better then i can do and in time if you keep practicing it, it will be a dope ass character to put up in spots... if your going to paint stick to tags and throwies, dont attempt burners or a straight letter yet....maybe attempt a straight letter after some practice but just stick to mainly tags and throwies for now if ur going out painting. just keep practicing simpler stuff. your second photo is good just work on the L and W the most, E and D i like but still needs more work as do i lol.
looking clean Hipe, make your letters bit closer to together, mainly the P and R, the space in-between in the two kinda puts it off. your R's first bar seems to go from skinny to fat but maybe thats just me, if your going to make your K's two smaller bars with that fat to skinny look, you should do it with your R as well, like the leg thing connecting your R's circular part if you get what im saying, sounds kind of confusing. your 3d looks good but maybe your O should have a bit more? keep it up
i like your N and R BigF. i dont like the top bar on your E's though, maybe give it a bit of a dip or somthing and dont have it come back as far behind the letter. maybe make the top of the E one closed off bar or like leave a little gap and then draw the bottom part. the bottom part is nice i think, just keep practicing and get it more clean and what not...yours seems to be cleaner then mine though ahah
Can i plz get some crits on the pictures i posted before??
Last edited by Kaze; 04-26-2012 at 03:31 PM.
Kaze. Straight letters. that is all.
thanks peter, so i should just lose all the bends and shit? should i just toss out and scratch the idea i had there or go more simple and try to build into it rather then jump some steps.
Yes! Always take a step back and look at your shit! When painting or drawing, it helps so much and that last part is true as well.
I can tell you're homies with Naked, ya got similar letters. But forreal straight letters for awhile or just fix these, the bar widths are all off. The left side of the Es, the right side of the R, the bottom right of the N. Fix it.
"Game recognize game and you lookin' kinda unfamiliar right now." - Riley Freeman
Ever heard of a fucking mop?
Nice N bigfaggot
Im about to flood this cuz ive been gone a little while.
Judging by all the Fuck you pieces I guess I've been in a good mood lately huh?
and a Gees piece for eyecandy
Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.
Rewz shut up its all joins ha
Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.
someone batlle me.
@shit otta luck, haha yea people say that, thatnks for the crit ill put it to use
@MildStyles haha shut meng you stole my N. and that was me on rewz, i forgot i was on his and posted.
You guys could just like, hang out with each other instead of talking on a forum...
Just a thought.
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