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    @Sol The horizontal bar that reaches towards the S. Might be worth a try who knows.

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    @ DEMPO i actually write orem, but there was some structure before my sharpie my marker skills are just lackin

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    @ bigafrica its school just next time you post acknowledge the crit and post a pic(of your next try) with your comment/crit.

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    1st try at a wildstyle
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    nah man go simple, it dont look good

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    Go simple Africa.

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    cred how the fuck did you do that fill?

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    ^ i was thinkin the same thing .. cred is pretty good


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    Quote Originally Posted by ven0m View Post
    cred how the fuck did you do that fill?
    It was sort of a flook how it came out. I used various shades of decocolor paint pens faded for the base layer, and prisma's on top using colorless blender to spread out the shades. Came out fancier than expected, looks a bit blotchy though.

    @Centry thanks man.
    @Soda Watcht the negative space on your S. You have lines representin all of the holes on your other letters but on the S you have gaps, try to keep it all consistent.

    Flick for talk, black and white of the last one just cleaner. Need to figure out better positioning for my E or something, it's always hiding behind my R.
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    can i get a crit on this, is this style too much of a push or what?


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    Cred: It's tight as fuck. looks like spray paint. You're workin' out the bottom of that E. It's a bit hidden now though.... but honestly who cares you've about got it down. start moving your 3d perspective.
    Gpers. I love that name. Is it too much of a push?... Yes, but it's not a huge stretch. Drop the arrows and some of the extra shit. Your bar consistency needs a bit of work but you're close. Draw what you have there, but with just straight letters and we'll go from there.

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    gpers, im diggggin that style, i just think it could be cleaned up in some places
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    I like the grimeyness of the style gpers
    friz start all over keyboard letters

    crits please I know I should keep my shit straight and simple. But I gotta experiment to develop... but Im lookin for crits on structure and 3d

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    ^3d is fucked around the O. Just draw lines coming off the corners in the exact same direction every time, then draw the 3d on. It looks like you do that, just gotta be more precise.
    Oh yeah the bottom right of the K is probly where you went wrong on 3d.

    Structure of the O needs work, pretty good bar consistency everywhere else.

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    like norfsuthr said the 3d on your O is kinda messed up. On your P it looks like it rises before it turns and drops down to complete the circle of the P. Maybe make your R closer to your P, other then the O's 3d it looks cool.

    Drew this with out a ruler so there is lots of areas that are off. crits please
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    Crits on this rugged marker freestyle?
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    crits plz.
    sol, the 3d on the bottom of ur S is a lil off, im not feelin those cuts on ur letters yet.
    kaser, best not to use a ruler. those blocks on ur S and R should be bar width matching your other letters.
    kopr, try not using structure on your O, your good at throws so an O should be easy for you. imo

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