@Frii try to keep your bar size more consistent. and your letters are too squished.
Messing with perspective
@Frii try to keep your bar size more consistent. and your letters are too squished.
Messing with perspective
not feeling that R at all. I don't like the left* leg of it. You seem to be getting your E worked out though. That hand needs help too!
This thread....
Not done yet, still space for juan more person and a background
Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.
Originally Posted by PETER
Word I think that r can be a easy fix tho cred. Like the leg on your c almost looks like it could naturally be the r's leg also jus a thought with a little tweaking..I may be off to cause idk alot on piecing.
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Put the O on a diet
KOPR. Try making your O out of two bars and give them a similar flex to the rest of your letters. Bend the left bar like the left of the K and the right bar like the bottom of the K and R, just stretched out. Just make sure to connect them so that it is clear it's an O. Idk if it will work, but it's worth a shot. Maybe shape the top like the top of the P and R.
Critz? Its not great but its the only thing I've felt like uploading recently.
"They say that most people can only dream in black and white
That's why he packs a knife and only reappears at night."
so did you punk outta the battle? or are you gonna reply... pussy
oh and that page is dope, naked
Naked I'm diggin that. The GEES dude...but your K-E leaves a bit too much space I think.
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Ever heard of a fucking mop?
solid idea wish I had thought that while sketching. thanks man
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mild styles those all look dope, only thing i can say is maybe maybe make your E of naked abit closer to the other letters but other then that it looks cool.
uknowigetup- i like your 3d shading on it, your last E seems to be bigger then the first one, but maybe thats just me, it looks like you messed up one of ur 3d bars on the M but other then those things i think looks good. just keep doing it and make it more tidy and what not
hipe- that idea peter said about the O sounds cool, i like your k and the bend on the letters, maybe try to incorporate those curves you have on the P and R on top your K somehow. the O is kinda big but Os just r a pain in the ass, overall it looks good and clean
Thanks all and yeah the KE is always hard to work out, but I'm gonna try.
And i had to color the gees cuz he left...my brain pretty much died trying to keep up with his blueprints im not ready for complex hahaha
Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.
Crits?
seld-fatten up the left half of the m its lookin a little anorexic but im diggin the D a lot
ill pm your exchange in a day or some with some crits on yours, dafuug
characters are mine rest is my boy
Don't hold back. I know that it's pretty wack, it's nice stepping out of my comfort zone though, thank dude
Nosleep that's pretty dope, I can't draw like that but the shit looks a little unoriginal, no offense just played out a bit, still good. Not a fan of those throws though.
Last edited by DaFugg; 05-01-2012 at 07:13 PM.
oh of course its unoriginal i only wish i could think of characters like that, and my boys still workin on em hes gotten alot better
The last one is the worst spaced randomly and no letter structure. The second one is just inconsistent and I don't like. The first one, is best but still needs more work, you can't make out any of the letters at all.
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