[QUOTE=DaFugg;1794260]The last one is the worst spaced randomly and no letter structure. The second one is just inconsistent and I don't like. The first one, is best but still needs more work, you can't make out any of the letters at all.[/QU
ill be sure to tell him
Jealousy, some say it's sickening
They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury
Originally Posted by Arose.One
that looks pretty cool dafugg, i like the top part of your E but i think the bottom part of your D is too fat but its a cool idea. i like your O just maybe make a litttle bit smaller and your M is nice just make it a little bigger lol...overal though i think its pretty cool looking
tastymcnasty- i think that throw is fucking sick.
no sleep- those characters are cool, your first one on the other page is my fav, the others could use work but still alot better then wat i can do. i like your friends simpler graff work too
Last edited by Kaze; 05-01-2012 at 07:40 PM.
thanks what u think of the letters?
no sleep, you're trying too hard. you're not good enough, in my opinion, to be working on two pagers. you need to get structure down better. lose any addons to letters as well
EDIT:
it;s like the blind leading the blind in here.
before no-sleep gets too much of an ego, and never simple-s up: you kinda suck. i am saying this for your benefit. cause if you get a big head now, you'll never learn the basics, and never progress. it took a lot of getting shit on to get to where i am now, even then i'm still not great. but i'm better. just for shits n gigs i'll show my progression since i joined this site.
Sep 2010
April 2012
Last edited by TastyMcNasty; 05-01-2012 at 08:25 PM.
Jealousy, some say it's sickening
They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury
that grand theft auto page is so nice though, i like that
Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.
no sleep- letters wise i like the bottum 2 pics, i think that R is dope. and yeh that gta one that you did is dope lol
no sleep-too many arrows, simp it up a bit. i really like the orange one, maybe lean your c a little more so it touches the top of the r
ight ill take what you said into consideration, when i have some more time ill upload afew more picturesno sleep, you're trying too hard. you're not good enough, in my opinion, to be working on two pagers. you need to get structure down better. lose any addons to letters as well
EDIT:
it;s like the blind leading the blind in here.
before no-sleep gets too much of an ego, and never simple-s up: you kinda suck. i am saying this for your benefit. cause if you get a big head now, you'll never learn the basics, and never progress. it took a lot of getting shit on to get to where i am now, even then i'm still not great. but i'm better. just for shits n gigs i'll show my progression since i joined this site.
Sep 2010
April 2012
also the first picture is from the beginning of summer at that time i was only writing for around 9-10 months, i try to stay away from arrows as best as i can now
Tasty, that pic is bad, but I love your through dude. I can't speak for the bottom bit. Not really feeling the second one at all TBH.
shit ****** you just went full on retard. never go full on retard.
and no-sleep, atta be.
Jealousy, some say it's sickening
They merely can't afford this highest form of luxury
both pretty sloppy, plenty of mistakes. seconds a work in progress.
i like the set of E's in the first one
A little thing i made up for a friend how is it?
Last edited by getpaiddaily; 05-01-2012 at 09:38 PM.
Nice shopping cart neer
that first one isnt even bad yo
But you need to work on your R's cuz both of them could use some tweaking
Last edited by Mildstyles; 05-01-2012 at 09:38 PM.
Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.
I hate iPhones. Autocorrect I grammar-retarded.
FULL grammar retard.
thanks no sleep.
Naked, What shopping cart? hahaha, thanks man, and i know the Rs need work, i wanna kick em out more and make the bottom bar that comes back in more symmetrical with the N's, but i always run out of space.
Last edited by BigFaggot; 05-01-2012 at 09:58 PM.
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