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    Naked I'm diggin that. The GEES dude...but your K-E leaves a bit too much space I think.
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    Quote Originally Posted by PETER View Post
    KOPR. Try making your O out of two bars and give them a similar flex to the rest of your letters. Bend the left bar like the left of the K and the right bar like the bottom of the K and R, just stretched out. Just make sure to connect them so that it is clear it's an O. Idk if it will work, but it's worth a shot. Maybe shape the top like the top of the P and R.
    solid idea wish I had thought that while sketching. thanks man
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    mild styles those all look dope, only thing i can say is maybe maybe make your E of naked abit closer to the other letters but other then that it looks cool.

    uknowigetup- i like your 3d shading on it, your last E seems to be bigger then the first one, but maybe thats just me, it looks like you messed up one of ur 3d bars on the M but other then those things i think looks good. just keep doing it and make it more tidy and what not

    hipe- that idea peter said about the O sounds cool, i like your k and the bend on the letters, maybe try to incorporate those curves you have on the P and R on top your K somehow. the O is kinda big but Os just r a pain in the ass, overall it looks good and clean

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    Thanks all and yeah the KE is always hard to work out, but I'm gonna try.
    And i had to color the gees cuz he left...my brain pretty much died trying to keep up with his blueprints im not ready for complex hahaha
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    Crits?

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    seld-fatten up the left half of the m its lookin a little anorexic but im diggin the D a lot

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    ill pm your exchange in a day or some with some crits on yours, dafuug
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    characters are mine rest is my boy
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    Don't hold back. I know that it's pretty wack, it's nice stepping out of my comfort zone though, thank dude
    Nosleep that's pretty dope, I can't draw like that but the shit looks a little unoriginal, no offense just played out a bit, still good. Not a fan of those throws though.
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    Quote Originally Posted by DaFugg View Post
    Don't hold back. I know that it's pretty wack, it's nice stepping out of my comfort zone though, thank dude
    Nosleep that's pretty dope, I can't draw like that but the shit looks a little unoriginal, no offense just played out a bit, still good. Not a fan of those throws though.
    oh of course its unoriginal i only wish i could think of characters like that, and my boys still workin on em hes gotten alot better

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    The last one is the worst spaced randomly and no letter structure. The second one is just inconsistent and I don't like. The first one, is best but still needs more work, you can't make out any of the letters at all.

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    [QUOTE=DaFugg;1794260]The last one is the worst spaced randomly and no letter structure. The second one is just inconsistent and I don't like. The first one, is best but still needs more work, you can't make out any of the letters at all.[/QU

    ill be sure to tell him

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    that looks pretty cool dafugg, i like the top part of your E but i think the bottom part of your D is too fat but its a cool idea. i like your O just maybe make a litttle bit smaller and your M is nice just make it a little bigger lol...overal though i think its pretty cool looking

    tastymcnasty- i think that throw is fucking sick.

    no sleep- those characters are cool, your first one on the other page is my fav, the others could use work but still alot better then wat i can do. i like your friends simpler graff work too
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kaze View Post
    that looks pretty cool dafugg, i like the top part of your E but i think the bottom part of your D is too fat but its a cool idea. i like your O just maybe make a litttle bit smaller and your M is nice just make it a little bigger lol...overal though i think its pretty cool looking

    tastymcnasty- i think that throw is fucking sick.

    no sleep- those characters are cool, your first one on the other page is my fav, the others could use work but still alot better then wat i can do. i like your friends simpler graff work too
    thanks what u think of the letters?

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    no sleep, you're trying too hard. you're not good enough, in my opinion, to be working on two pagers. you need to get structure down better. lose any addons to letters as well

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    that grand theft auto page is so nice though, i like that
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    Quote Originally Posted by no-sleep View Post
    thanks what u think of the letters?
    no sleep- letters wise i like the bottum 2 pics, i think that R is dope. and yeh that gta one that you did is dope lol

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    no sleep-too many arrows, simp it up a bit. i really like the orange one, maybe lean your c a little more so it touches the top of the r


 

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